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Our Girl and Captain James Discussion Thread Vol V

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icemist · 24/11/2014 22:12

Feel free to join in as we discuss all things Our Girl related

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Ben Aldridge
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Ilovelblue · 03/12/2014 21:55

icemist have you been able to add the alternative chapter we wrote to Those Words We Needed to Hear? Apologies if I've missed something, it's been a busy day.

Nickel not able to add in any OGisms but after the meeting, when fortunately I had switched the projector off but my laptop was still on, a woman who I don't especially like came to talk to me. My screen saver had kicked in by now and eventually, between photos of family, holidays and so forth, a picture of CJ popped up. "Who on earth is THAT?" said the woman. I said "Oh, he's been on a TV programme and since x, y and z have ribbed me about it, I decided to add him to my screensaver just to annoy them. Do you like him?" She screwed her face up and said "Oh no, not my taste at all!" Well all I could think is that she has NO taste whatsoever.

Ilovelblue · 03/12/2014 21:56

Ooops, finished this too early. Have you seen we have 5 reviews on SPO's writing and 8 on the other one? Not bad eh, early days....

firegirl · 03/12/2014 21:58

Mattress on the floor, how the memories have come flooding back! Mostly used between 2 and 4 am. And yes I was going to work in the morning. At least if I wake up at night now I can think of CJ. If only I'd known him then!
Richtea I hope you have a fab time tomorrow regardless, and say hi to NVM from us.

Nickel45 · 03/12/2014 22:00

Different, cherin!!! Bet the teachers had fun making that Christmassy!

Is NVM back on here? I hope you didn't ditch Ben, or us? Try and get her back richtea, she's missing all the fun!! And if her Upton Park report is anything to go by, she should be helping us out with the fanfics!

Nickel45 · 03/12/2014 22:02

Agreed, ilove. No taste at all! Bizarre!!!

Richtea19 · 03/12/2014 22:15

Midsummer Nights Dream is certainly different! But lovely to have some sort of Christmas production. At my sons school they have a carol concert, but neither of the boys are in the choir. I loved the primary school plays, always could guarantee a tear or two.

ilove I'm glad your presentation went well and I can't believe your colleague didn't find him handsome, mental or what!

cjwoofwoof · 03/12/2014 22:38

Thanks Richtea you've found the ultimate tongue-tip suck! That's the one!! There's another slight one earlier in Ep 2 after Molly's finished the obstacle course and is wearing the Minnie Mouse ears and CJ is admiring her from afar with a slight sucking motion and lips ever so slightly apart. Totally lush or what? I KNEW they were in there somewhere. So glad I did another 5 hrs of research. What that man can do with his mouth/lips/teeth/tongue deserves a Bafta in its own right. "This years award for inciting women's lust in the oral dept goes to...Ben Aldridge for the Tongue-tip Suck"

cherin · 03/12/2014 22:38

Nah, she was clearly bluffing. She's probably reading us now. You don't spot a bloke like that from a screensaver show and point it, if you don't really like what you see. Timid, that's all. She's not as confident in our craziness like us!!

Ilovelblue · 03/12/2014 23:08

OK, had a go at this whilst waiting for the consultant tonight. Honestly, when the guy charges £600 an hour, you'd think he could at least be on time. (Don't worry, I don't have to pay for this myself). How does this sound:

“Boss, so much has happened over the past few weeks. I can’t think straight. I’m all over the shop. I thought you were going to die. I thought it was my fault………… I’m just not sure how much more I can take at the moment.”

Molly was out of breath, she knew she was rambling, was incoherent, but she just didn’t know how to handle this. She had dreamed of him declaring his intentions for months and now he had, she couldn’t cope with it all. The emotions were so raw. All she kept seeing in her head was Captain James, a born leader, lying weak and bleeding in the Afghan dust. If she hadn’t befriended Bashira, none of this would have happened.

“I have to go now.”

On impulse, she pulled a pen out of her top pocket and wrote her mobile number on his arm.

“I’m really sorry sir, I’m a total mess. Ring me in a few days. We have our medals presentation soon then we are on R&R. I’ll be at home and might be able to get my head round it all.”

With that, she went off to find the rest of 2 Section and Corporal Kinders.

Captain James sank back wearily on the hospital pillows as the door closed. He watched Molly disappear down the corridor and bit his lip, hoping and praying he hadn’t ruined everything.

Nickel45 · 03/12/2014 23:17

Brilliant ilove, perfect! So weird, I'd also thought of her writing her mobile number on his arm, but couldn't work it out in my head!

Am off to bed (having missed my early evening nap!), night all.

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Our Girl and Captain James Discussion Thread Vol V
cherin · 03/12/2014 23:20

Excellent!! Very very good...will have to think about that first phone call, now! Can't figure CJ texting...

I have tried to take a picture of that sketch done during the meeting...but in this light it's difficult, and anyway the stance is a bit wrong...more than a stag getting ready to give Molly a bollocking, he looks like the tower of Pisa ;-)

I have carefully avoided adding the BulgeMeasuring Team in action (I was at a meeting, after all). But I can't beat our very own Manara here ;-)

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firegirl · 03/12/2014 23:21

Ooh ilove that's good. And she wrote on his arm, brilliant! I love the way the whole 'Molly can't handle it Captain James confused' thing is going.

Ilovelblue · 03/12/2014 23:22

Yeah, so much for getting 8 hours sleep. This whole thing has just got me hooked. Think of my elderly friend who thought this thread was porn! If only she knew.........

Night night all.

firegirl · 03/12/2014 23:29

Yes, not good for early nights, this thread. cherin I love seeing your sketches, look forward to more. Night everyone x

cjwoofwoof · 03/12/2014 23:31

Well done Ilove! I'm feeling the yearning, literally. Never understood how she manages not to snog his face off in that hospital bed when he looks so drop dead gorgeous vulnerable, but you've managed to give her some self-restraint which I obviously lack! And Nickel I'm loving that pic which is one of THE moments of the tongue-tip suck so deserving of the Oral Bafta. I'm gonna dream of that mouth sleep well tonight!

Nickel45 · 03/12/2014 23:48

PS meant to say earlier, but thank you for the encouraging words SPO and richtea when I did some of the story (was really nervous!)! It meant a lot, thank you.

apsara03 · 03/12/2014 23:58

Argh my phone keeps losing my posts.
Sorry about the bad news cherin life can be sh*t sometimes.
loving the continuation to the fan fiction. Sweet dreams everyone x

SPOfficer · 04/12/2014 00:10

ilove that is really good stuff. Number on the arm is genius. cherin great picture again!

Nickel45 · 04/12/2014 00:36

Well, no one told me that if I started getting involved in this writing malarkey, that I wouldn't be able to get it out of my head. Bother! It's like an itch that needs scratching!

So, here's the next bit (hopefully now I've got that down, I can sleep!), feel free to change it though, I can't decide if I like it or not ....

As she slowly walked back to Smurf's room, tears ran down her face. She hoped and prayed she hadn't ruined everything. "Hey Molls, where have you been?" said Mansfield, coming up behind her, "I've been looking for you, we have to go". Molly quickly wiped her face and smiled ... she needed the distraction of 2 section. No matter how much she wanted to, she no longer had the choice to run back to the Boss, stroke his hair, kiss his lips, and tell him how much she loved him. She just had to trust that he would call .... and soon.

icemist · 04/12/2014 05:59

Fab piece to go with our fiction nickel

My day off now so when youngest has his nap later I'll sort the next bits of fan fiction out and get our other story published.

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Our Girl and Captain James Discussion Thread Vol V
Our Girl and Captain James Discussion Thread Vol V
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Ilovelblue · 04/12/2014 07:13

Damn you lot - I woke up thinking about this about 45 minutes ago! At least it was early enough to get it all down on my laptop whilst it was relatively fresh in my mind! How's this:

Back home in Newham, Molly couldn’t sleep. She had been like this night after night. She would wake up, her heart pounding, the sheets covered in perspiration. The image as she woke up was either of Bossman bleeding out in the scorching Afghan sun or of Badrai pointing his rifle at her. Above her, totally oblivious to Molly’s mental tortures, her little sister slept peacefully in her bunk.

Molly’s family was so chaotic that during the day, she barely had time to think properly at all about the last six months in Afghanistan. There were children to feed, squabbles to sort out and her parents’ bickerings to try and ignore. On top of that, she had to try and get used to the frequent visits of Shazza. She would never like Shazza, she knew that, but on the other hand, she could see that she was good for Belinda and if she could help her mother focus on something other than her unruly family, then maybe it wasn’t a bad thing after all.

Molly looked at the clock. 4 am. Suddenly, her mobile started to flash with an unrecognised number.

“Who’s that?” she said in a muffled, sleep deprived voice.

“Molly, we have to talk. I know now is not a good time but I guessed you can’t sleep, just like I can’t?” said an oh too familiar voice . Familiar yes, but maybe with slightly more hesitation in it than usual.

“Boss?” she stuttered, her heart starting to pound again. “Give me a couple of minutes, I don’t want to wake everyone up.”

She tiptoed out of bed, opened the front door and went to stand outside on their balcony, wondering what on earth she was going to say………

SPOfficer · 04/12/2014 07:16

nickel that's developing nicely, lots of potential. I know what you mean about having to get it out once you have started writing. Lovely pictures icemist

icemist · 04/12/2014 07:23

Thank you spo figured I needed to start putting some Molly ones on for you.

I love it nickel this is turning into a lovely piece of writing. Will put it on google docs later so we can see how it looks together

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Nickel45 · 04/12/2014 07:41

Ooh, a 4 am conversation, brilliant, ilove. I'm at work today, and my boss is in the office, so might gonna have to do some actual work ... Maybe ;)

Great pics icemist and love the drawing cherin.

pixieg1rl · 04/12/2014 07:44

Good writing people. Yes, I can attest to the not sleeping thing. Luckily DS managed to distract me since about 4 by coming to my bed, wriggling, coughing and twiddling my hair.