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Mom came back home after delivery

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Margaret1978 · 01/01/2014 19:11

I have a question. What do you thing about organizing mom's return home (after giving birth) according to the scenario giving below (older daughter, Kate, is 10) ???

SCENARIO:
Kate was returning home from school, and she was so rushed that until out of breath. With all the strength rang the bell, my mom immediately guessed that it was none other than Kate goes. "Wait a minute!", Daddy's voice came through the door."Come on, Kate, come on", he called opening the door. "Come and say hi to mom." "Where?" Kate was surprised, because her mother did not come out into the hall.
However, after the moment she heard mom's voice from parents' room: "Peter, let Kate take off the coat and wash your hands before you come here."
Finally! Kate with all the momentum run into parents' room. She came and stood in the doorway in her tracks: Mom is back - this is true, but she is not bustling about, mom isn;t not sitting up with a book: she is lying! Lying in bed and pulls out a hand to Kate: "My Daughter!" "My Daughter!" repeated mom. "Come here to me and say hello to me.".

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MrsKCastle · 01/01/2014 19:13

Eh?

ilove · 01/01/2014 19:13

what?

MrsBennetsEldest · 01/01/2014 19:14

Makes no sense, sorry.

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IHaveSeenMyHat · 01/01/2014 19:16

I could not be more confused.

Pancakeflipper · 01/01/2014 19:16

Margaret1978 - are you writing a novel?

tiktok · 01/01/2014 19:16

Is this some sort of story?? It needs proof reading and correcting as it makes little sense at the moment. If you want feedback on it as a piece if writing find the appropriate folder and repost. I think there is a writing folder somewhere.

MrsKCastle · 01/01/2014 19:17

No, I've re-read the scenario and I'm still not sure what you're asking. I don't see anything remarkable about the scenario. I don't understand why 'Kate' would be surprised to find her mum in bed though, if she has just had a new baby.

RubyGoat · 01/01/2014 19:18

Clarification please?

Pancakeflipper · 01/01/2014 19:18

I like the instruction to take her coat off and wash her hands first. Mom is very organised and on the ball.

Back2Two · 01/01/2014 19:20

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Shakey1500 · 01/01/2014 19:21

Um. I'm sorry, I actually don't have he foggiest idea of what you're asking and could make no sense of the paragraph.

Cataline · 01/01/2014 19:23

What are you asking us to comment on exactly Margaret?

MarianneEnjolras · 01/01/2014 19:25

Lying in bed! Lazy cow. Won't even get off her arse to say hello to her eldest daughter. Clearly some favouritism going on there.

And "THE coat". Do they only have one? Some sort of family coat that gets passed around according to need? Or do they have a rota?

Some weird shit going in in that family.

MrsBennetsEldest · 01/01/2014 19:28

I would suggest you start again. Then read what you have written. Then read it again. If it makes sense, repost and we can have another go.:)

HorsePetal · 01/01/2014 19:30

Are you ok Margaret?

ErrolTheDragon · 01/01/2014 19:30

Is 'my mom' kates mom or someone else - is there a 1st/3rd person confusion here?

Ememem84 · 01/01/2014 19:34

Huh?

Thurlow · 01/01/2014 19:39

I'd try to stop swapping tenses within the same sentence, that would help.

Other than that I genuinely have no idea what that is about Confused

atomicyoghurt · 01/01/2014 19:39

Um...

FigEater · 01/01/2014 19:39

I like the SCENARIO have you got any more? What's Kate's motivation here?

FannyFifer · 01/01/2014 19:41

Leave the bastard!

JodieGarberJacob · 01/01/2014 19:42

Whose hand is mom pulling out? I need to know before I can comment further.

Juno77 · 01/01/2014 19:47

What in holy hell is this about? This makes absolutely no sense.

Quintessentialmadonna · 01/01/2014 19:49

snigger

Quintessentialmadonna · 01/01/2014 19:49

This is a joke i presume? I hope? I am confused !?