Just want to make sure it sounds ok and is laid out properly....Thanks!
Dear Mr Tory
Re: 3 Bell Street
I am writing in reply to your recent letter regarding overdue rent. I am currently waiting for conformation of my transactions from my Barclays account into the accound of the Dunning Will Trust, as, despite having made several payments on top of our regular rent the 'overdue' amount seems to have suddenly increased again.
As soon as I recieve documentation of my payments from Barclays I will contact you again to arrange payment of any overdue monies.
I have also had an inspection carried out by our Health Visitor with regards to the damp in the house which is still prominent in the middle room and bathroom. My 3 year old daughter has now been diagnosed with asthma and it seems to be the dampness of the house which is the prime cause of this. She is now having to be referred to a paediatrician and asthma specialist.
Despite blocking the front of the house where the rain was getting in, there is obviously water lying under the house as we re-painted all the walls after you addressed the problem but the paint has again come straight off where the walls are wet.
We are also awaiting a visit from Environmental Health with regard to the garden and the rat issue. As I wrote in a previous letter to you, after the poison was laid, the garden was never checked for dead rats or for further runs. Residents from further up the street are continuing to leave rubbish at the end of the garden on a weekly basis which is sure to contribute to rats coming back.
The property is described as 'with a garden' but due to no-one bothering to sort the rat problem we have no garden which, with two young children, is a major problem.
There is also another problem a little further up the alleyway - one of the residents has taken to hanging pheasants to a pole across the alleyway which is not only disgusting to see but will also attract rats.
As soon as we have had these visits and had paperwork returned from Barclays with regards to the rent I will contact you again.
Yours sincerely