Another couple of holes/lies in the SalRay's writing of the diagnosis in TSP that I had previously overlooked...
1:
The endless trips to doctors’ waiting rooms had begun six years previously. A debilitating pain in his shoulder and arm, and then a tremor beginning in his hand, had led to doctors believing he had Parkinson’s disease, but when that was proved not to be the case, they felt maybe it was nerve damage.
It seems, in my opinion, that it is very unlikely doctors, over 6 years, would go from thinking/believing it was Parkinson's to then revert to the far more vague nerve damage...and THEN go back to believing it was CBD/S.
2:
But this doctor was the top dog, head of his field, the real deal. He was going to tell us that it was ligament damage or something similar and how it could be fixed; that it had happened when Moth fell through the barn roof years ago – maybe there’d been a hairline fracture. He was certainly going to tell us how it could be put right. He would sit authoritatively behind his desk and tell us this. Without a doubt...
...[a few lines later]...
‘The best thing I can do for you, Moth, is give you a diagnosis.’
No, no, no, no, no. Don’t say any more, don’t speak, something awful is going to fall out of your smug, tight lips, don’t open them, don’t speak.
Why the sudden panic and despair at the mere mention of a diagnosis? At this point she has no idea about the awfulness of CBD and knows Parkinson's has been ruled out. Meanwhile, the above paragraph shows she had been expecting a diagnosis (i.e the cause of Moth's pain) from the top dog - indeed why else are they there to see the Dr - so her sudden aversion to hearing a diagnosis before it is given simply doesn't add up, whether true or fiction. More likely a sign of how it was made up for dramatic effect but done badly.