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VirtualPA · 29/04/2010 20:05

Hi Everyone. (I have name changed)

Would you mind having a look at my website and telling me what you think? I run a company that offers administrative assistance.

Thankyou!

www.virtual-pa-uk.com

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angel886 · 30/04/2010 01:59

Is it an american company? You use a lot of "z" where I would use "s" in words which makes me think this.
The site looks very professional but would defo benefit from a logo of some description.

thumbwitch · 30/04/2010 02:08

I find it odd that you have no Home page - clicking on the Home page link takes you to the About Remote Assistant page, second tab. That needs to be rectified.

From a personal pov it looks very bland - I realise you are going for a professional look but the colour is dull. Also, dark brown on the header tab could be difficult to read/see for some. Perhaps you have gone for dull to emphasise the dullness of the work you plan to undertake for people, that's what it looks like from your blurb - but it's just not attractive. More vibrant colour (not too much!) would indicate a more get-up-and-go attitude to me.

Agree a logo would be a good idea.

VirtualPA · 30/04/2010 11:03

Hi,

It is an english company.

Thank you for the feedback

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flowerybeanbag · 30/04/2010 11:15

Agree colour not good. It makes it look a bit old-fashioned, especially with the 'notebook' look of the main body of the site. You want to give a professional, modern, up-to-date look, not one which is more reminiscent of a secretary.

Site is very wordy and repetitive in places, needs to be punchier.

You need some images, it's all text at the moment. Ideally a logo, but some pictures as well.

It's not clear what's going on in the sidebar on each page. You've got headings 'Pages', 'Category', 'Archives' and 'Recent Comments'. Under the Pages heading there are obviously links to some of the other pages, but some of those links are repeated in the header bar and some are new ones, I think you need to either not have that bit at all, or it needs to be the same as the links in the header bar, or sub-pages of the page you are on at the time.

Not sure what 'Category' is all about tbh. If you click on the 'Uncategorized' (what does that mean?) link, it takes you to what looks like a kind of blog, with some random links at the top, and repeats a lot of the stuff on other pages.

'Archives' then takes you to more bloggy stuff and more repetition.

It says 'Comments are closed' at the bottom of pages, not sure what that means.

Sorry if that all sounds negative. It's a really good start, I just think you could make it so much better.

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