I have changed my CV profile to this does it sound OK now

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....Profile
Well qualified graduate, experienced in working in a flexible and demanding role in a customer oriented environment, with excellent administrative skills and the ability to work to targets and deadlines. Self motivated and able to use initiative and communicate at all levels.

You forgot the word 'multi-tasking' but I like it

Sounds v. good

team player - they like this.

I have taken pout manage and management

It is supposed to be able to apply to these adminsitrator type roles

I have had a shop and website but I dont want to apply for shop managing jobs especially as having had my own I dont really have shop chain management experience

It has taken me two weeks to get past last my rejection I am now ready to try properly again

I like it. Maybe the first sentance is a little long? could maybe have a full stop after environment? It is fine as you have it though.

I am not lookng forward to going back to work when the time comes. The last interview I had included a maths test! I didn't get the job.
I always cringe at the time I said 'I like to give 110%' at an interview.
And the time the interviewer said 'what are all these gaps in your cv?'
'errmmmmm, I don't know, maybe I wasn't working'

I always say something I cringe about

maybe explains why I don't have a job

I think I have finally worked out that their questions are designed to find out if you can/will do what they need so it is best to answer yes followed by an example rather than well Not so far etc

right I shall change it