Civil Service Grade 7 application

[Tallandfab]

Hello everyone.
I was wondering if someone would be willing to help. I have applied for a grade 7 finance role and need someone who has dealt with these applications to proofread mine and give me some pointers. I have read and re-read the competences but I'm not sure I have done a good job with my examples. I came across some really useful advice that was posted some time ago on here so I've taken those on board.

Many thanks

i can't offer any advice as i'm a much lower grade than you, but did you use the competency framework to structure your answers?

Make sure that your examples clearly show leadership and that you have a good quantifiable outcome - eg this led to a 60% increase in productivity or this saved £x per annum recurring

Thank you for your feedback. I will quantify my examples.

I used the framework to structure my application.

Thank you once more