Anybody care to look at my statement in support of a job and tell me what they think?

[tanfastic]

First job application in fourteen years!

Could do with someone just casting their eyes over it. It's for a reception/admin job in a school office.

The person spec is pretty short really but I can let you know what that says - PM me if there are any experts about!

Thanks.

Hi- you can send it to me if you like- I'm a Careers Adviser and happy to give you some feedback