@katiegoestoaldi
Are you talking about emailing your MP to get them to attend the meeting at the House of Commons on the 16th?
Here is something you might be able to use. I've taken it from my own email, but my message is deliberately specific, because my MP has already received letters from me. ( i've changed it a bit, so it is cut and pastetable for you).
Dear
I'm writing regarding proposed reforms to the Gender Recognition Act and the current public consultation.
There is a meeting at the HoC where my and many women's views are being represented by Fairplay for Women, TransgenderTrend and a Woman's Place UK. Details below.
Can I request that you attend as my MP?
The issues that women have been concerned about are currently coming to a head. We are now in a situation where a convicted, self-confessed rapist has been transferred to a woman's prison, despite not historically identifying as a woman, nor having a GRC. He sexually assaulted four women and has since been convicted.
This is 2018. How can women in prison not be protected from convicted rapists??
I'm not underestimating the issue when I say this is the most significant threat to women's rights in a hundred years. If you cannot identify the group called women, you cannot uphold their rights.
Which is how we have men representing women on all women shortlists, diversity boxes being ticked where women are represented by men, men who just cross dress twice a week (Phillip Bunce), receiving accolades designed for women to encourage them in business, and rapists assaulting incarcerated females.
Women everywhere are being silenced. The dictionary definition of women as an adult human female is considered transphobic hate speech.
Normal women have been arrested, prosecuted, threatened with rape, relentlessly doxxed, punched (resulting in a conviction) and threatened with bombs, purely for speaking about this issue.
I urge you as my MP to support me and other women over this issue by attending the meeting.
Meeting: How will changes to the Gender Recognition Act affect women’s rights? Tuesday 16th October 2018 at 10:30am until 12:30pm in Room S, House of Commons
Yours sincerely
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Bear in mind you have to put your address in the email, because your MP will dismiss it if you don't confirm that you are in their constituency.
Also, here is a link to the consultation, where they fill it in for you. I think the site is down at the moment, but I should imagine they'll get it back up soon.
fairplayforwomen.com/email/?nonamp=1#wpforms-17854