The Duke of Edinburgh award reference nearly did me in, utter UCAS statement gold. All it needs is a quote from Voltaire.
Clown fish are not an example of "triumphant queer politics of marine biology" nor does their existence give a biological basis for drag acts. Ironically, sequential hermaphroditism is a reproduction phenomena, for the species to propagate. Clown fish exist in extremely complex and rigid social hierarchies, it's not about which one likes glitter (for fucks sake).