I need a lovely Mn'er to read through my short essay on feminist and the family and marital breakdown please?

[mamicar]

Its only 500 and odd words. I was given it back to me on wed because I missed the point completely. I am so lost with this subject!

Is anyone willing? I can share the link to it on google drive if so.

I had to evaluate the feminist views on the family and in particular how it relates to marital breakdown.

My brain hurts and I think I am to close to it to pick up on grammar mistakes and whether it even makes sense!

Pretty please

I would have a look at it for you. What are you studying? The only thing is I don't like to give out my email address, could you copy and paste it into a PM for me? Don't know if that would work or if we are limited in length.

If not, I'm sure you will get other offers and it could be good to have a few points of view.

Thats fine :) I can pm you the link.

I am doing an Access the health professions course. Struggled with sociology from the start. :( I will pm you now.

Thank you

OK, cool will have a look. Sounds like a pretty tricky essay!

Hey Buffy, would be good if you could take a look.

Mamicar, I have PMed you - I don't see why you have been told that you have missed the point completely. Your teacher needs to make the objective of the essay clearer if your essay is not what they have asked for...

Would be good if Buffy would take a look and may see something I'm missing as I'm clearly completely missing the point too!

will pm you :),

That would be very helpful Buffy if you have time. My grammar is a bit poo but DH fixes that for me just before I print it lol