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SorchaMumsnet · 01/09/2016 15:34

This week we're spoiling you and giving away a massive 300 copies of Missing, Presumed! Head to the giveaway page to apply - plus read the top tips on writing crime fiction from author Susie Steiner.

Missing, Presumed tells the story of a missing girl, a desperate family, and a detective at breaking point.

We ask all winners to share their thoughts about the book on this discussion thread. However, you don't have to win a free copy to take part in the discussion - anyone who has read Missing, Presumed can post their feedback here (and you can buy the book now).

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This giveaway is sponsored by HarperCollins

Find out what Mumsnetters thought of Missing, Presumed by Susie Steiner
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oneplus2is3 · 11/10/2016 22:56

The first thing that needs saying is the classification of this book as a thriller needs addressing. It is by definition not a thriller- there is no sense of suspense, no notable twists and by no means are you on the edge of your seat waiting with baited breath for the next revelation. Yes, parts are very well written but I feel Steiner is a good writer who knows that literary fiction is not a profitable as crime so has decided to try her hand at a detective novel.

The narrative focuses primarily on the police investigation, which is very slow moving. There is very little for the reader to work with. Manon is difficult to like as a protagonist, and the ending left me frustrated- far too neat. There are a number of secondary characters who add little to the story, in fact I thought they may have just been included for future storylines should this be developed into series but then the ending undermines this.

So yes- if you want to follow a police investigation give it a go, if you are expecting thrills and spills then give it a miss.

daisyduke66 · 11/10/2016 23:51

Firstly, thank you for my copy. I'm an avid crime fiction reader so was looking forward to this one. Not a lover of blood and gore, this appealed. It's very much a procedural piece and the author has evidently put much research in. However,slow to get going and,even then, didn't go far.Only an 'ok' storyline- doesn't gallop along,more of a very slow tick. I'm afraid it didn't grip, no surprises.

safaristar · 12/10/2016 11:03

Thank you for sending me a copy of the book! I wasn't sure how I would find it, as I'm generally more of a chick lit reader, though I have been trying to get into thrillers this summer as I fancied reading something with a bit more suspense and drama! I found the characters interesting, but the plot did not sadly hold my interest. I did not find much suspense in this story, and it did not really feel like a mystery book at all.

Holidayenthusiast · 12/10/2016 16:10

I won a copy of this book and have just finished reading it.

This story is a crime thriller / police procedural. It is a complex missing persons case - Edith Hind disappears leaving her front door open and without her coat, bag or phone.
The novel is full of secrets unearthed, and it twists and turns on its journey towards its conclusion. The story is told from the point of view of the cast of complex characters including the investigating police, family and friends of the missing woman. Each bring a different slant to the life and motivations of the central character, almost to the point of wondering if any of them knew the real Edith.
A great read!

mummyhappiness · 12/10/2016 17:18

Just finished. Great page turner !
Thanks for the free copy Smile

slev · 12/10/2016 19:09

Thanks for the book - and to set others' minds at rest, I'm another who applies but doesn't post on the thread - sorry!

I couldn't get on with this unfortunately. Firstly, I don't like books written in the present tense - but I realise that's my own personal preference so won't hold that against the author.

However, the book itself just didn't deliver. I was expecting a fast-moving whodunit, whereas this just seemed to drag on and on. I didn't feel I really got to know any of the people involved in the disappearance, and at times it felt as though that was secondary to the story. Then the whole thing was very rushed at the end and just felt a bit unsatisfying.

Probably a case of misunderstanding what to expect from the book - if I'd realised what it would be like, maybe it's have felt differently about it - but all the blurb seemed to suggest it was a thriller, and I wasn't thrilled!

pinkpixie83 · 13/10/2016 06:41

Thanks for my copy.

I'm afraid to say I wasn't impressed. I felt it was slow to get going and continued that pace.
I couldn't feel a bond with any of the characters and while you keep reading to find out what happened I wouldn't have been upset to not know.
I found the present tense storyteller hard to keep going with but the detail was good.

On the whole a 4/10 for me.

Valski · 13/10/2016 19:53

Crikey, stunned into silence by how gripped I was throughout Missing, Presumed.. Exceptional, definitely a stand out novel of the year I reckon.. Will compose thoughts over weekend and post back, but three cheers for Manon Bradshaw - the most realistic crime fiction heroine to be seen in ages! Many thanks to all at Mumsnet for the copy.

Rachel

Rhimchugh · 14/10/2016 12:57

Whilst I enjoyed the book, it wasn't gripping. As other readers have called out, it wasn't a very thrilling thriller, and there were no big shocks or twists. I did like the way the chapters were written with different characters' points of view, but didn't bond hugely with any of them. I did like Manon as a protagonist but would like to have seen her developed more. It was a very well-written novel but left me wanting from the "thriller" perspective.

popsocks · 14/10/2016 19:38

I'm afraid I didn't enjoy this book at all. So much so that I haven't even finished it.
I prefer a fast paced page turner, and this for me dragged on.
I have passed the book on and will write up what my friend thinks of it when she has finished.

LJBLJBLJB · 15/10/2016 07:22

I was lucky enough to receive this book. I am about half way through so far and I'm really enjoying it! It is set following a missing persons case with the narrative from 4 different characters in the story. Strong female characters within the plot even if one is a so-often single female (slightly desperately) looking for love....If you liked 'Girl on a Train' you'll probably like this book 😃

Valski · 16/10/2016 10:39

Loved Missing, Presumed and Manon Bradshaw will return.. My thought in the form of a review below. Much obliged Mumsnet!

Missing, Presumed which introduces DS Manon Bradshaw of the Cambridgeshire Major Incident Team can loosely be classed as a police procedural, with the spotlight very firmly centred on how the individuals involved cope with the fallout from a high risk missing persons investigation. Hugely involving, Susie Steiner provides multiple viewpoints to build up a brilliantly complete picture of all of those involved and affected, from the detectives, to the family and friends of the individual. Focused on the internal discourse than runs through their heads as they struggle to manage their lives with Edith's fate hanging in the balance Missing, Presumed is refreshingly realistic and provides a personal insight into a sensitive investigation.

The case in question is the seemingly suspicious disappearance of Edith Hind, a twenty-four-year old English post-graduate student from the home she shares with her boyfriend just outside Cambridge in Huntingdon. All the signs seem to indicate the worst with the front door left ajar, blood spatter on the carpet and evidence of a struggle. The pressure on the investigators is compounded by virtue of her well-connected family, father Sir Ian Hind and his wife, Lady Miriam, are notably good friends with the presiding Home Secretary. The initial hours bring no answers on Edith's whereabouts and as the days turn into weeks and the new year is welcomed in, it seems that the events may never be known. The investigation into Edith's fate progresses at a snail's pace, resembling the events of Roseanna by Maj Sjöwall & Per Wahlöö; the initial golden hours are followed by a cooling of efforts and a sense of flagging morale as the search for a body becomes seemingly inevitable. The characters involved, both police officers and family and friends are brought to life exceptionally well and Susie Steiner portrays realistically flawed individuals in a frank and honest, warts and all view.

The detective readers get to see at closest quarters in Sergeant Manon Bradshaw, a bright Cambridge graduate with her own troubled family history and demons. As a modern woman, pushing forty and single her fellow officers seem very aware of her biological clock ticking. Manon is a conflicting mass of emotions, needy and facing a future on her own, but also someone who can find failure with absolutely everyone that she encounters! Honest, often to the point of blunt, Manon hates her loneliness and all it signifies but is fiercely critical and dismissive of those that cross her path on the continuing cycle of internet dating. It is almost as if Manon has been disappointed by her life and perhaps expected more, never living up to her high standards of perfectionism that she envisaged. She is wonderfully honest about her own demons and she is the first to deliver an acerbic reality check on her emotions. Hot-headed and too quick to take offence, Manon is a walking, talking bunch of contradictions; a modern career woman hoping for more from her life, and rightly so!

Admittedly, it is the sassy, opinionated Manon who readers learn the most about, but the chance to hear from the affable DC Davy Walker was also appreciated and together they provide a well rounded view of the police investigation. Susie Steiner also provides an insightful social commentary, willing to broach the areas which a rigid police procedural might feel beyond their remit and acknowledges the scaling back of efforts and the no holds barred views on the people that cross their path. Fellow officer, Colin, is left to vocalise much of the public opinion of Edith as a do-gooder, with noble principles and apt to preach but sheltered from the realities of so much of life by virtue of her privilege and education.

As befitting a broadsheet journalist, Steiner dazzles readers with her perceptiveness of just how the media bandwagon can hold sway in a high-profile case, starting with their enthusiasm for a "festive stiff" and the "complex love life" of the daughter from a privileged family to keep the circulation numbers up. However salacious gossip in the red tops is soon swiftly followed by criticisms at the lack of progress and memories of the mistakes of Soham, when the unrelenting refusal to raise the urgency level remained at the front of all the detectives minds. The overriding feeling is that as far as the media is concerned, it is more than ever a case of "damned if you do, damned if you don't". In this way the constant trade-off between the increasing cost of the Edith enquiry and a need to justify every pound spent, with the pressure filtering down to the detectives and uniforms on the street, is cleverly played out.

Often crime fiction authors can be tempted to paint a whiter than white picture of the lives of victims, but here Susie Steiner manages to turn an ambivalent point of view as regards Edith Hind almost full circle, resulting in a feeling of real antipathy on my part as the novel proceeded. It fell to mother, Miriam and brother, Rollo, to acknowledge Edith's willingness to hog the limelight and her overly dramatic tendency to magnify every event in her life. The attention to detail and the depth that Steiner imbibes all of her cast with ensure that Missing, Presumed hauntingly presents so many angles of the story in realistic detail. Aside from Manon, Miriam as mother to missing Edith is brought to life exceptionally well, juxtaposed between an overbearing husband, Ian and showing gratitude to the well-wishers and police, all the while confronted with the fact that she actually knew very little about her child. Miriam's forthright honesty was truly moving and in that respect Steiner captures perfectly the forgiving love of a mother, evoking memories of The Good Girl by Mary Kubica, which I certainly recommend to readers who appreciated this aspect, particularly in regard to being forced to reappraise the view of ones own child.

Missing, Presumed is a darkly humorous journey along the rocky road of a sensitive police investigation, which manages to be starkly honest and insightful yet maintains a plausible plot along the way. Susie Steiner tackles head on the upshot of Edith's disappearance, managing to oversee a genuinely moving and impassioned conclusion, always resisting playing the overly twee card. Perceptive and a true pleasure to read, I look forward to the return of Manon Bradshaw which Susie Steiner has confirmed.

Rae1000 · 16/10/2016 19:12

Really enjoyed this book. It is quite meaty & complex. Just my cup of tea. I do like my crime thrillers. Thanks for choosing me & I will now pass it on to a friend to read who likes these sort of books too. Thanks!

muddledsheep · 16/10/2016 19:44

I've really enjoyed this book altho I found it quite long and slow going in places. That said, I would certainly look out for further books from this author in the future. Thank you for the book!

doggyg · 17/10/2016 15:48

Thanks for my copy of this book. Unfortunately I didn't really like it much. I love crime/thriller novels but this one was just too slow for me and I felt that there wasn't much to it. I found myself not really caring what had happened to Edith in the end. There were quite a few sub-plots that didn't add anything to the overall story, apart from just making it feel even more of a slog to get through.

AutumnDragon · 17/10/2016 16:10

Thank you for my book.

I love a good thriller / crime novel and this one started out well. I didn't gel with the main character, Manon, but I've noticed that is becoming a trend in modern books / shows of this genre.

At first, I found myself thinking of the plot between reading sessions, which is always a good sign, but found that the book started to drag in the middle a bit. I did, at times, feel that I was reading a wannabe screen play rather than a novel.

Overall it was a good read and I would be willing to read more from this author.

millililli · 17/10/2016 19:55

Thank you for my copy. I felt that the book was overly long and padded out with often annoying descriptions : 'he'd felt completely lost. like a sad hole had opened up beneath him'.
Harriet repeatedly adjusting her bra strap was distracting and there were story lines that were difficult to believe, , like Miriam visiting the clairvoyant. Manon was not a sympathetic protagonist and the writing in the first person was annoying,
However, overall I enjoyed the book and wanted to keep reading to see what happened, but as others have suggested, the ending was a bit of an anti-climax.

ScarlettDarling · 17/10/2016 21:49

Many thanks for the opportunity to review this book and apologies for the delay in writing my review...I had a couple of books I wanted to read before I could get stuck into "Missing Presumed".

I really enjoyed this book! No, it wasn't a particularly thrilling thriller. There were no moments which had me on the edge of my seat. But it was a well written, gripping story. I really liked Manon and so wanted her to find her happy ending, (which I suppose she did, though not in the way we were hoping! ) I loathed Alan Prenderghast! Thank God that didn't work out!

Yes the plot was far fetched, yes the ending was perhaps a bit weak but overall it was a most enjoyable read. My husband is looking forward to tackling it now.

susanterblanche · 18/10/2016 17:33

Thank you for my copy! I really enjoyed it & will definitely pass it on 😊 I enjoyed all the different story lines & perspectives & was not expecting the ending, I would definitely read something else from this author

sylwright · 18/10/2016 21:32

I'm loving this book, am almost at the end and finding the story gripping. I really hope there is a happy ending for Manon. I will definitely watch out for this author again.

Kiwirose · 18/10/2016 21:40

I really liked this book - especially because I am from Cambridge so recognised lots of the places and descriptions.

I really liked the fact that each chapter was written form one character's perspective (except sometimes when I wanted more from a particular character). The difficult relationships brought it to life for me - and it would have been too clean if Manon and Davy had have found love. I loved the back story of internet dating and then meeting someone like Alan Prenderghast who is just in it for himself. At one point I wondered if Davy and Monon would get together.

I would have liked to have known a bit more about Edith's lovers. And her tutor and uni was totally believable too.

The bit I really didn't like was the "sorted" ending which didn't seem to fit - guess I wanted it to be more messy, coz that would have seemed more real.

I would definitely recommend this book to others and would read more by the same author.

toastymarshmallow · 19/10/2016 12:15

I have just finished reading this.

It took me longer to read than a similar book usually would because it just didn't grip me. I loved the style of writing and the little details but it became too much about the mundane and not enough about the actual story so I found myself getting bored.

Maybe the aim was to look at a crime investigation realistically, but generally I think people read crime fiction to be gripped by a fast paced story. I know I do.

Miriam annoyed me at the end, basically saying what Edith did was worse than what Ian did and all the standing by him shit. I don't think we learned anything from hearing Miriams perspective and it didn't move the story along at all.

I did like the relationship between Manon and Fly, and I thought the disintegration of her relationship with Alan was uncomfortably realistic, which was good.

So generally I feel like the issues were with the story, not the writing, and for that reason I would read this author again with hopes for a faster paced and more gripping story.

Susangilley7 · 19/10/2016 16:01

Have received my copy of Missing Presumed. Look forward to reading it. Thank you.

P1nkP0ppy · 19/10/2016 16:18

Having just finished reading this I have to say that I found it quite slow moving yet it kept my attention. I usually read more gritty crime thrillers that keep the reader in suspense so I was slightly disappointed at the amount of mundane material.
Having said that I'm looking forward to reading more by Susie Steiner.

JacquelineChan · 19/10/2016 16:22

i just finished it yesterday !

very , very good - and i read a lot of these type of books - most of them are a very obvious who dunnit but this is great. I genuinely did not see the ending coming and if you liked Girl on The Train you would love this

I have already looked at other books by the same author to add to my reading list !