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Do you like this idea for my book?

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red54 · 04/09/2014 22:19

A mysterious portal opens and people are taken in by deformed figures and not return.
a researcher discovers that these people are dead and taken there could be no human survivors, because the intention is that the man is replaced by a perfect being would exist in place of the human being.
a group that escaped including this researcher and his son take refuge being hunted by deformed and survive and find a way to destroy the various portals.
Update : I intend to write more than one book.

OP posts:
Suzannewithaplan · 05/09/2014 00:20

I think you need to brush up on sentence construction before you start working on the plot Wink

JazzAnnNonMouse · 05/09/2014 03:40

Idiot really get the 'intention is...'

JazzAnnNonMouse · 05/09/2014 03:40
  • I don't
MrsCakesPrecognition · 05/09/2014 03:43

Are you going to be writing in English?

ShanghaiDiva · 05/09/2014 04:07

Agree with Suzanne.

BikeRunSki · 05/09/2014 05:19

What Suzanne said. It doesn't really sound like my cup of tea.

Eminybob · 05/09/2014 06:00

I can't really follow your op I'm afraid so can't comment on the content.

Is this a book you a planning to write yourself?

SavoyCabbage · 06/09/2014 05:29

I can't follow it either.

GreedyGonzales · 06/09/2014 05:42

Lost. As in, I cannot follow what you've written which does not bode well for a book series.

Thumbwitch · 06/09/2014 05:46

A combination of the Bodysnatchers and Logan's Run, that sort of thing?

I agree, though; you really need to improve your written English before you embark on a book, or even an essay for that matter.

YoniMitchell · 06/09/2014 05:52

Sorry, I don't get the plot. Could you tell us again with a clearer outline?

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