Hopping about wanting to talk to someone about it.
- I found it very hard to let go of my inner editor. I think it could do with a bit more work
- WTF with the 'ending'. Is it supposed to be the first of a trilogy or something because it reads like they just didn't publish the last two chapters. The story ends so abruptly and it's fucked me off, quite frankly.
- I enjoyed it in the same way I'd enjoy finding a half decent story on Literotica, but I am very very surprised it got published. Maybe some of my half-finished novellas stand a chance after all ;)