Could someone please proofread this letter to my LL requesting permission for a dog

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As the title said really, DP and I really want a rescue dog, and we need a letter of permission from our LL. I'm not sure how to word the letter and need some opinions. Thanks

It's privately rented, but the owners own all 72 houses here, and more around London.

Blimey! That's a lot of houses!

Is moving to somewhere dog friendly a possibility at all? Dog's Trust have some information [http://www.letswithpets.org.uk/petowners/petowners here].

Try again: here.

Not at this time, we just can't afford to find another deposit. Being in the South East, they aren't cheap! Maybe in a few months, yes.

Thanks for that link though, I'll keep that!