Yes it looks stripy, now stripy isn’t necessarily a bad thing but I think the photo lacks finesse. Sadly it looks a bit amateur, which is unacceptable if you have paid full price with a supposedly decent stylist.
In the left side of the photo near the parting there’s a box shaped patch of brown hair. It needs breaking up a bit. I wonder if this is something to do with the foils perhaps, it sort of looks like you have regrowth! Whereas on the right side you can see the highlights added right up to the root? Also the highlights seem more sparse on the right side of the photo. Definitely uneven and not blended.