I like it as a piece of art, I'm not convinced it would translate well into a tattoo.
Please think about the long term implications of having a tattoo, especially in a visible area. I have one that seemed great at the time, now it's an embarrassment. Our bodies change, our tastes change, the tattoo will only ever look worse as you age.
Each to their own, but a sleeve tattoo on someone in their mid twenties or thirties looks very different to the same on someone in their sixties, skin elasticity and muscle tone go, tight arms become saggy. Not pretty!