when I got dd1's proposed statement, I asked for a meeting to discuss changes we wanted made.
the LEA ignored this request/procrastinated for 2 months (despite legal invvolvement)
once we had the meeting, they still stalled.
they were, however an extreme expample of useless LEA.
since we moved, and dd1 is now at a (private) ASD school while we wait for new LEA's words of wisdom, and new school advised me to just rewrite the statement.
so i typed out the whole document, and jsut amended as I saw fit - deleted thing i didn't like, added in things i wanted said, and then sent it off with a cover letter saying something along the lines of " We were not entirely happy with the way the statement read. The attached is an example of the type of support we are expecting for dd1"
I have yet to see how successful this approach is, but having had an LEA who ignored everything we said, and blatantly made up things we didn't say and then "quoted" us, i thought at least this way I was sure that y words weren't being taken down incorrectly.