Does 'embedded in the curriculum' need changing in a draft EHCP?

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I received the draft of my youngest's EHCP (he is 27 months, pre verbal and has GDD) and am currently going through attempting to remove all the woolly language but I keep seeing the term 'embedded in the curriculum' for the majority of section F. I have now read it so often that I dont think I can see the wood for the trees so was hoping someone could let me know what this should be changed to or even if it needs changing at all.

Any other pointers would be greatly appreciated as well!

It depends on the wider wording. On its own it can be quite vague. But something like “embedded throughout the whole school day as part of a [insert what is required - differentiated/adapted/personalised/bespoke] curriculum [and if will be in a placement ‘whole setting approach’]’ would be tighter wording. It would also still need to say who will be delivering it, etc.