Is anyone willing to have a look at my amendments to parts 2, 3 and 4?

[KOKOagainandagain]

I would be hugely grateful if anyone who has trodden this path before could cast an eye over what I have done so far. My aim is to make it as demanding as possible but I have never done this before. Alternatively, are there any good sites (done 'getting the statement right' and ambitious about autism what a statement needs to look like).

PM me if you have the time .

Thanks in advance.

Have pm'd you.