Thank you Thank you Thank you, to everyone who gave me advice for DD2's statement. After a meeting with the LA today I now have a statement worth the paper it is written on.
They gave me everything I asked, in fact I asked for 32 hours and they'e given me 32.5 (not sure why but never mind). They've even changed all the wording for me (quoting you lot really).
No need to reply, but I am so grateful for all your help. Definately couldn't have done it without you!