The objectives in dd2's statement are ridiculously vague - would apply to any child anywhere eg. To develop communication skills to meet her potential 
I've just read a document about improving the way statements are written and in there the egs of objectives are really specific eg. will reach level 2 in literacy by end of year 6.
Am just wondering how objectives are written in other counties - our county is notoriously bad. Is anyone willing to share examples just to give me a feel for how I can re-write dd2's?