Hate

[Roxmum14]

A short poem about hate.

I hate the winter,
I hate the smell,
I hate the way it reminds me of you,
I hate how much I miss you,
And I hate that I hate you.
I hate the way you say my name,
I hate the way I should be there with you,
I hate you
And I hate that I love you still.

Probably healthier not to focus on the negative so much...

That's really helpful 👏

It's a lovely poem OP and it says what it needs to say. Nothing wrong with expressing difficult feelings and all the better if you can do it with such succinct eloquence.

Thank you❤️

Writing, poetry especially, is a very good and healthy way to let your feelings out.

Well done OP, and thanks for sharing something so personal. I hope your poetry helps you heal.

Thank you for the kind comments ❤️

Haven't you just copied this from the '10 things I hate about you' film ?

If you don't want comments, why post on a forum? You can't expect everyone to love your hate.

No, I've never seen that film. 🙂

No, I haven't seen that film

Watchkeys - thanks, but I haven't actually said I didn't want any comments!

Tuttifruti - no, I've never seen that film

I think it highlights how love & hate can run along parallel to each other. And it's good to be able to vocalise it through a written verse or poem...Well done.

Thanks - your sarcastic response to mine suggested you didn't like it.

I like it op.

Writing is good for cleansing the soul.
Have you any more ?

Well done Roxmum.

I'll join you if I may... A poem, Needs Be

A flirt, A kiss, An intention, An Abyss
Needs Be

A flat, A house, A mortgage, A home
Needs Be

A pause, A break, A baby is born
Needs Be

With life and time our burdens adorn
Needs Be

A lie, A kiss, An intention, I mourn
Needs Be

An ache, A split, An ending, A new dawn
Needs Be