***anyone good with words?? -need help with competition!!***

[kittylette]

theres a comp i want to enter to win your dream wedding, its tell us in no more than 100 words why you should win this dream wedding ...

but im not good with words!!

i think we should win it because we are childhood sweethearts, together since 15, have only ever been together. Have 2 small sons and not alot of time together because we spend it all on them. we never get to go out EVER so need this special day, we havent got alot of money but deserve a really special day, so to win this would be perfect!

can anyone word that better/ add to it??

thanks

'We've been dedicated to each other since the age of 15, and more recently dedicated to our young sons. However, we hardly have any time for ourselves, and little money for such a special day, so i really feel we deserve this wonderful opportunity for a lovely wedding day'

Don't know if it's actually any better

This Dad and Mum
Are tired of the hundrum.
Please make our Big Day
Special in Every Way!

Short and snappy?

huMdrum, obviously

OMG! i just showed DF my entry (i found the comp in a trafford centre leaflet yesterday) and he said he has already enetered us in it!

He works at the trafford centre and entered last week!

how sweet is that?!

i asked him what he said and he put ... (hes typing this ..)

'My girlfriend and I have been together since we were 15. 7 years and 2 sons later she is still as beautiful as the day we met. She devotes every moment she has to our small sons and i desperatly want to give her the special day she deserves as i love her so much'

!!!!

im sobbing!

Aaah, that's so lovely, kittylette.

I think his entry is better. Leave it at that. If they see you have both entered they may disqualify you. Good luck!!