A piece of DD writing, friend thinks it's excellent... What do MN teachers think please

[Minimaxkids]

I've seen others post writing on MN so here goes.
The name S is spelt correctly but is distinctive so just left it as S.

onec a pon a time there livd a Prinsess called S. One day she was going to mareey a prinss but S coodonte choose wich Prinss. At larest S choose the perfict Prinss then they mareed. Suddenly a witch zoomed in and took the prinsess to the witches castle and tied the Princess up the End.

Part of my reason for asking is she did this at school during one of the endless colouring in sessions her teacher does. We have been v unhappy with this teacher for many reasons. She is so bored of colouring in she wrote a story instead. It's neat and well formed on lined paper.

She is in Y1

so she is only 3-4months older than my daughter. we had an ORT Jackdaws book this weekend too, stage 9 but Lime book band. she didn't mind it compared to most of the drivel. I have to use bribery for school reading usually.

There's another thread running about a boy in Y1 with a poor teacher (IEP disagreement thread) I had to double take at the description of the teacher, thought it was DD's

DD had progressed but I don't think she hit her stride this year. It's horrible waiting the year out hoping next will be better

it isn't that long to the end of the year now and over the holidays if she likes writing herself then she will probably progress anyway ready to start next year fresh with a new teacher.

We are lucky, my daughter's teacher is good. I just hope her yr1 teacher will be too.

I am kind of dreading next year as DD (reception) has an amazing teacher this year (she had her in nursery too).

DD's writing would be about the same/not far off but writing does not float her boat as much as reading and she will only do it when she wants to...