What do you make of this sentence from my 6yr old DD?

[Rollergirl1]

She came back from school happy as larry with a Star of the Day award for something that she had written that day. They were asked to write a piece about a specific scene that they had been discussing. She wrote:

?I can see love floating in the air and I feel it touching me ever so slightly".

I asked her what it was about and she said that it was about Jesus (she goes to a catholic school).

I think it's beautiful but then I am biased. Does it sound like DD might have a talent for writing?

It's very poetic. What is her writing like in general? It's difficult to comment conclusively on one line because here in the forum we don't have any idea what was going on at the time when she wrote it. It's a lovely line, though. There's no doubt about that.