Meet the Other Phone. A phone that grows with your child.

Meet the Other Phone.
A phone that grows with your child.

Buy now

Please or to access all these features

Pedants' corner

Please can someone help me write a few short paragraphs

3 replies

memoo · 12/01/2010 10:25

Or at least give me a few pointers.

My grasp of the written word use to be quite good until I have my baby but I am struggling at the moment to string a sentence together let alone a few paragraphs.

I am applying to become a mystery shopper and need to write a few paragraphs about what qualities I think a good mystery shopper should have.

I think that they should be friendly, able to communicate well with other people, not be afraid to approach memebers of staff and ask questions, be keen on receiving good customer service.

How do I say all this in a coherant manner? and what else should I say?

I would be sooooooooo grateful for any help

OP posts:
memoo · 12/01/2010 10:26

They should also have the ability to be able to record their finding accurately

OP posts:
misscph1973 · 12/01/2010 10:28

Just elaborate on what you say:

"I think that they should be friendly, able to communicate well with other people, not be afraid to approach memebers of staff and ask questions, be keen on receiving good customer service."

Just spread it out in a few paragraphs. It will come to you as you write.

Good luck!

memoo · 12/01/2010 10:33

Thank you! I have real baby brain at the mo!

OP posts:
New posts on this thread. Refresh page