Which or That?

[LadyWaiting]

Can you correct this sentence please - if it needs correction? Thank you.

"You feel proud and confident that you have a new talent that people seem to enjoy, and that people seem to love."

Given no response, I'm assuming you believe that the sentence is correct?

It’s grammatically correct, but personally I would rewrite it to have fewer “that”s.

What is wrong with just writing

"....that people seem to love and enjoy."

Too wordy

"You feel proud and confident in your new talent that people seem to enjoy to love."

Yes too many that’s!

“You feel proud and confident with your new talent that people seem to enjoy and to love”

What’s it for?

It's my dd's submission to the school magazine, speaking about her love of music. I automatically suggested 'which' in place of the last 'that' - it just read 'off' to me. I've googled and 'that' is only used when there is a following clause, otherwise it's 'which'.

That’s nice! I usually know how things should be written but down know the rules. Then it’s handy living with an English lit grad. It’s pants when playing scrabble of course...