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Please help me to find this poem

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Scruffysitter · 22/11/2023 08:34

Hello,

I read a poem on a random instagram post a few weeks ago, which really moved me and I can’t stop thinking about it. However I’ve no idea how to find it again so I’m hoping someone here might recognise it from my description. It’s words written as a mother to try and distract/comfort their child while they’re sheltering in their house in war time. It was linked to an Israel/Palestine post but it may not been written specifically for the recent conflict.
It repeats the phrase ‘shut/close your eyes’ multiple times and has phrases like ‘that’s not a bomb you hear’, ‘that’s not a boot on the stairs’, ‘count my heartbeats’, ‘think of x time/memory’, ‘that’s not someone coming into the room’. And it finishes with ‘shut your eyes and when you wake up you’ll have a new life’.

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RedDuffle · 09/03/2024 07:41

Scruffysitter · 22/11/2023 08:34

Hello,

I read a poem on a random instagram post a few weeks ago, which really moved me and I can’t stop thinking about it. However I’ve no idea how to find it again so I’m hoping someone here might recognise it from my description. It’s words written as a mother to try and distract/comfort their child while they’re sheltering in their house in war time. It was linked to an Israel/Palestine post but it may not been written specifically for the recent conflict.
It repeats the phrase ‘shut/close your eyes’ multiple times and has phrases like ‘that’s not a bomb you hear’, ‘that’s not a boot on the stairs’, ‘count my heartbeats’, ‘think of x time/memory’, ‘that’s not someone coming into the room’. And it finishes with ‘shut your eyes and when you wake up you’ll have a new life’.

Don't know if you're still looking OP but it's by Joseph Fasano

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RedDuffle · 09/03/2024 07:42

Whoops didn't mean to quote your whole post!

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stormonasummerseve · 09/03/2024 07:58

Oh that's very moving ☹️

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MyGooseisTotallyLoose · 09/03/2024 08:02

Oh that is so moving! shouldn't have read while I was feeding my baby, very much actually teary!

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Scruffysitter · 09/03/2024 14:10

Oh thank you so much for that! I was a bit off with my description so you did a good job finding it based on that!

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RedDuffle · 09/03/2024 23:03

Your welcome, I had seen it myself previously so recognised your descriptions straight away l. Luckily a Facebook search brought it up 😊

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RedDuffle · 09/03/2024 23:03

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