Cheeky Favour Number Two...

[ELF1981]

... does anybody (who has a few 10 mins on their hands) fancy playing teacher for a bit? I'm in the process of getting the guts up to send something I've written to the publishers, and would really appreciate if
a) somebody wouldn't mind reading the proposal (when I've written it!)
b) correcting my terrible grammar before I send it and the three chapters off?

TIA

am more than happy to cast a pedant's eye over it

Thank you
Would you like me to email you the chapters, or just post them on here?
It wouldnt be until tonight, at work at the mo and college later

either fine by me

email is mrs dot tutter at hotmail dot co dot uk

Brill, shall email tonight, thank you

Hi Tutter
I have sent you the email

happy to read for content, flow and so on. cant help with spelling, sadly

maggiesmama, hi!
If you emails me on Emma.Foss @ yahoo.co.uk I shall send over what I sent to Tutter, really appreciate others comments as I have not let anybody else read it as yet (aside from aunt-in-law!)

elf - so sorry - i spent last night throwing up - went to bed at 8:30 so missed your email

can have a look when ds naps - in the next hour or two, is that's not too late?

Hi Tutter,

sorry you have been feeling poorly hope you feel better soon!
I'm in no rush, want to send off next week but still have to write letter / sypnosis so in no major rush.

Cheers
Emma

hi -will have a look either tonight or over the weekend then

emma, i'm really sorry i haven't had chance to do this. you may have seen my other thread (prob not actually) but i've been having a nightmare (pg, poss not pg, poss pg)

i did actually do it on friday, but like the technical buffoon i am i can't find where it's saved to

there were a handful of things - i remmeber one was the US spelling of 'apologised'. also there was repetition of he laughed/she laughed

i will try to find the time to have another go in the next couple of days but can't promise, sorry

btw, i liked it

fun and energetic

and saucy

lol thanks Tutter. I shall readdress my laughed! And re-do with a British speller. Glad you thought it was energetic though

Havent seen your other thread (yet), but hope things work out.

bump for maggiesmama - did you have chance to cast your eye over it?

miss elf. shamefully i have not yet. because i got distracted by a boy, which was, er, fun for me, but irritating for you. i will do it NOW. and apols for lateness.

No apology needed, got the email, thanks for the comments

BTW points taken on board and I'll be adjusting 1st paragraph accordingly