Help advice wanted on wording..

[Moomingingercat]

Hi All, Im taking part in the Aviva Breakthrough for Breast cancer 60K Walk (yup I did write 60K not a typo!!)and wondered if you could take a look at the following link for me and let me know if you think the words I've put in are OK or if they are over the top, the link is as follows \link{http://lo06.break throughweekend.org/site/TRC?pg=peditor&fr_id=1020&px=1433395}
Really would appreciate ANY comments and don't mind at all if you think it should be changed just want to try and raise as much money as possible for this amazing cause so want it to be as good as it possibly can be (also obviously if anyone would like to sponsor me please feel free to click on the friend option on my page and it will take you through how to do so...every little bit really helps..Cheeky to ask I know but Ive got to try!!)

Can't look at the link mc?? Otherwise, Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Opps..try this one and see if it works..

lo06.breakthroughweekend.org/site/TR?pg=personal&fr_id=1020&px=1433395

Pls can you let me know if it doesent or if Im being a numpty

Looks fab \link{http://lo06.breakthroughweekend.org/site/TR?pg=personal&fr_id=1020&px=1433395\here}

Thank you for doing my link thing properly..I did try but brain is like a mash potatoe due to 3mth old not sleeping at night and two yr old hyper (but great fun) taking all time during the day. Sure not too over the top?

Am definately going to make a donation for you. Just to let you know though, the link for 'To print a donation form, click here' doesn't seem to be working.

Nope, very moving actually. (Made me very emotional, and not due to having any sleepless nights either lol) So impressed by what you are doing, and that was BEFORE I knew you had a 3mth old!!! In awe.

Thank you, thank you, thank you, will let Avivia know about print thing not working...if you click on freind option you can donate on line if you want to...... Thank you thank you thank you
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You are absolutely more than welcome. Will keep bumping for you. x

Don't be in awe please. Am doing it cause really belive its such a worth while cause. Also to help remove all traces of awe...I'll tekk you just how much I have really lost all power of normal thought at the mo. Had to fill in a form the other day and it wanted the date and I could not rememeber it. However in my befuddled brain could rememebr that the next day was the 24th so put that down instead... but could not work out that would make it the 23rd by counting back one day. Scarily stupid at the mo!!

Hmmmm think I am going to have to stop typing now as spelling and typos gone a litle mad..tekk=tell!!

Lol!!! That's like me on a good day! And my youngest is 5.... Is a very very worthwhile cause. Have been toying with the idea of doing something too... need a severe kick up the backside to do it though.

Have lost this thread on active convo's for some odd reason...

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I am bumping this for my sister moomimgingercat and for my mum. I know that there are loads of people on this board who, like me, have been personally affected by breast cancer because it has happened to them or someone they love. Please please have a look at the link and donate if you can. Thankyou

Thank you, thank you, thank you to all of you who have already donated..it really will make such a difference, thankyou thank you thank you xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Heres the link again to save anyone having to trawl through the thread to try and find it

lo06.breakthroughweekend.org/site/TR?pg=personal&fr_id=1020&px=1433395

Thanks again all cannot even begin to say how grateful I am for everyones help

\link{http://lo06.breakthroughweekend.org/site/TR?pg=personal&fr_id=1020&px=1433395\here} m'dear.

Glad you are getting support.

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