Hi All, Im taking part in the Aviva Breakthrough for Breast cancer 60K Walk (yup I did write 60K not a typo!!)and wondered if you could take a look at the following link for me and let me know if you think the words I've put in are OK or if they are over the top, the link is as follows \link{http://lo06.break throughweekend.org/site/TRC?pg=peditor&fr_id=1020&px=1433395}
Really would appreciate ANY comments and don't mind at all if you think it should be changed just want to try and raise as much money as possible for this amazing cause so want it to be as good as it possibly can be (also obviously if anyone would like to sponsor me please feel free to click on the friend option on my page and it will take you through how to do so...every little bit really helps..Cheeky to ask I know but Ive got to try!!)