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I'm on my PGCE and it's not going well - anyone willing to help me plan a lesson?

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Alambil · 17/05/2009 15:52

I've got my uni tutor coming in on Tuesday

It needs to be the lesson of my life

The info I've got from the teacher is:

Narrative unit 4 - Stories about Fantasy Worlds - Jack and the Beanstalk

Drama: explore familiar themes and characters through improvisation and role play

Unerstanding and interpreting texts: use syntax and context when reading for meaning. Recognise the main elements that shape different texts.

Creating and shaping texts: use key features of narrative in their own writing. Create short simple texts on paper and on screen that combine words with images (and sounds)

Sentence structure and punctuation: compose and write simple sentences independently to comminucate meaning. Use capital letters and full stops when punctuating simple sentences

Presentation: Use the space bar and keyboard to type their name and simple texts.

That's it.

For a student that's struggling with getting the lessons right - NO other information has been offered and if I'm not wrong, I could have just grabbed the info I have got on the internet anyway cos it's just the curriculum
stuff

I'm pissed off and can't think what to do.... I've got 4 lessons to teach it.

OP posts:
popsycal · 17/05/2009 19:23

all welcome to email me

AitchTwoOh · 17/05/2009 19:23

my dd gets it. she feels v sorry for the giant. isn't it your job to help them make the connection?

cazzybabs · 17/05/2009 19:25

well possibly...but not in a literacy lesson. it wouldn't met my objective

Rothwellmummy · 17/05/2009 19:28

Have emailed popsycal but not sure if has gone through as i don't know if i did your email addy correctly! (sorry to hijack lewisfan)

popsycal · 17/05/2009 19:30

got it and rweplied

mrz · 17/05/2009 19:33

Aitch as a teacher I would include it (even with very young children we did similar with Goldilocks & the 3 Bears) but it's different when you are a student and have to meet someone else's objectives.

ellingwoman · 17/05/2009 19:33

For ICT could you have some sentences on Word that they have to correct?
e.g. The next morning jack looked out of hte window He saw an enormous beanstalk. i am going to climb that hesaid.

Otherwise agree with story sack. You could ask the group who do that Monday to re-enact it in the plenary so the group who are going to do it on Tuesday can see what's expected.

Good luck!

mumblecrumble · 17/05/2009 19:35

i thought in original story Jack gets back his father's treasures or somthing?

Oh yes! Philosphy!!!

Think Veraa's lessons sound FAB!!! I wonder if the reason my 6th formers are so unconfident at expressing themselves verbally is because their teachers thought sch lessons were mnot educational enough. We [for kids aged 18] often encourage this kind of imagining and questioning.... Gets them using key vocab and becoming more confident in their subject.

Have very different teaching experience but wanted to wish you well. Your uni tutor surely knows you and wants to support you rather than being a big test. Please go for something simple and that doesn;t rely too much on stupid computers/whiteboards going wrong.....

Get kids doing stuff asap so you can go round class and chat with them, give informal immediate feedback and assess how everyone is getting on. Also means you don;t have to be standing nervously in front of class too long!

LOVE idea of magic wand to make everyone into Jack!

mumblecrumble · 17/05/2009 19:37

P.S. My favouite observed lesson structure is to have 3 groups and 3 things happening and rotate them. Do you have TA, their own teacher and you for 3 group leaders? Just a thought. I like it because it keps them mega engaged, lots going on. Need very simple 'intstructions'.... may not be suitable for year 1 I suppose

mumblecrumble · 17/05/2009 19:39

P.P.S I think the level of planning support and input from your teacher is shite by the way. I ould mention this to your uni tutor during feedback.

I know you[re expected to plan but this sounds a bit cold to me.

Sorry for many posts

AitchTwoOh · 17/05/2009 19:41

i'm not against imagining and questioning, lord no. my point initially, however, was that not one of the suggestions even mentioned the fact that it is a supremely dodgy story. of course use that as a springboard for discussion, indeed not to seems like a massive failing.
(obv lewis is only following orders etc but i was surprised that none of the responses mentioned what seems to me to be The Whole Point of the story).

mumblecrumble · 17/05/2009 19:44

AYe, story is pants.

pointydog · 17/05/2009 19:56

to be fair, this is a post about a student teacher who is panicking and who has to base four lessons around jack and the beanstalk, regardless of teh morals of the story. She has a short amount of time to plan and people are trying to help her meet objectives.

robinpud · 17/05/2009 20:03

I feel for Lewis, really I do.
I've been doing it 15 years and it gets harder sometimes! I think the guidance given is woefully inadequate fwiw.

If you want quality writing you need to inspire the kids to use imaginative language, so they need plenty of opportunity to speak so some meaty drama is called for.

I would start by retelling the story as far as the climbing up the beanstalk bit. Use props as much as possible and go for some really animated story telling. I have golden beans made from kidney beans coloured with a gold pen. Then invite chn onto magic carpet( rules for drama) and take them to the top of the beanstalk. Use drama to get them to explore. What can you see/hear/etc. Use freeze framing to control so that only 1 child at a time is speaking.

I would stop at that stage and ask chn to write/type postcards home to their mother. The writing focus would be using descriptive language to convey to the reader the setting.

I would start the next bit(day 2-Tues) with some sound effects to suggest the giant is coming.. ask the chn to describe the giant to a talking partner, then give them huge piece of paper with giant outline and get them to write short sentences on the outline to describe the giant. Use big markers and look for proper sentences with a describing word. differentiate for less able obv.

For the final outcome you could look to retell the story from the giant's point of view.. perhaps interviewing a giant (hotseating you or Ta or even articualte child)

Have to go and read to ds but hope you get some inspriation somehow soon.

mrz · 17/05/2009 20:07

Sorry I posted the wrong link before here is the storytelling into writing link

Writing Games
Imitate

Read a short poem or paragraph to the class. The game is for them to listen carefully and then as soon as you have finished write down as much as they can remember - filling in gaps if they need. In pairs, they can compare results and then listen to the original. This develops memory but is also interesting because different people remember different sections - or everyone remembers the same piece - why?
Interviews

Children work in pairs - one in role as the poet or author and the other is about to interview them. Read a poem or paragraph. The interviewers then ask questions and role-play an interview. Hear some in front of the class. Questions can be about the poem - but also any other aspect that the interviewer deems interesting!
Story Sale

Choose an object from a story and write a For Sale notice, e.g. For Sale - The Minotaur's Horn. Straight from the labyrinth, the genuine article...
Likes, dislikes, puzzles and patterns

Put children into pairs to make a list about a story or poem of likes, dislikes, puzzles and patterns. Or, each pair makes a list of 5 questions they are curious about. Later on, list these as a class and see if other pairs can provide ideas or answers.
Story Poem

Stop at a vivid moment in a story. Use a simple frame (I heard., I saw, I touched., I wondered.) to write a senses poem in role as a character in the story, e.g.

  • I heard the distant rumble of the Minotaur's hot breath.
  • I heard the dark hooves scraping the sandy floor.
  • I heard the heavy beat of my heart as it drew nearer.
  • I saw the sudden sharp flash of its red eyes glinting in the darkness.
  • I saw the ragged hair and the flared nostrils.
  • I touched the cold walls for comfort.
  • I touched the thin string of Ariadne's hope.
  • I wondered if my fear would turn into dust

Exploring feelings in a poem or story

a. Choose a key object from a story - something which made you feel something (happy? sad? bored?) and explore why:

The ball of string made me feel sad because.

b. Work in role as a selected character, explaining how he/she/it felt at that moment in the story. Present as a monologue:

I am weary because
"What if" re-telling

Think of a "what-if" moment in a story when events could take a different turn. Make a list of these key moments - usually at a crossroads where decisions are made. Make notes or draw events and prepare to tell what happens next in your new version. This works best if you can give examples, e.g. Theseus drops the ball of string and cannot find it in the darkness.
Dialogue

Choose a favourite moment in a story and write some dialogue for that moment, either as part of a play, as a duologue for a pair to perform or as a piece of story writing. Discuss with the class possible scenes.
Phone a Friend

a. Choose a specific moment in a story. In role as a character, phone a friend, another character or a member of your family, explaining what has happened, how you feel and what might happen, e.g. imagine you are the Minotaur in the labyrinth. Phone your Mum!

b. Or, phone an agony aunt for advice.
Personal

Does anything in the story remind you of something that happened to you (e.g. a time of surprise, a time of fear, a time of shame, a time of violence, a time of fun)? Tell or write the anecdote.
Miming scenes

Prepare to mime a scene from a story, a poem or extract from non-fiction. Will the rest of the class be able to guess which scene?
Meetings

Prepare to hold a meeting, e.g. to discuss in role as local people what is happening in a story or poem or to debate a piece of information or viewpoint.
Gossip

Between characters or about events. These could be main characters or bystanders.
Thoughts in the head

Work in pairs - choose a place to stop in the story. In role - say aloud what the different characters might be thinking - is it the same as what they are saying? Or draw a cartoon and thought bubble for a character in a story or poem.

pointydog · 17/05/2009 20:16

ah pie corbett, the storymeister. Great ideas there, mrz

throckenholt · 17/05/2009 20:17

got any time to stick in some science ? How about something about what things are needed for growing and how realistic is it that the bean

a) grows so quickly
b) grows so big

Then maybe think how big it would have to be to hold their weight, and maybe an adults weight, and how heavy would a giant be ? What would happen if the stalk was not strong enough etc

You can use that as their writing and drawing exercise too.

popsycal · 17/05/2009 20:19

pie corbett is a genius
also has some fab ks2 resources that i love

mrz · 17/05/2009 20:26

I'm going to his non fiction writing course in July [excited smiley]

popsycal · 17/05/2009 20:28
cazzybabs · 17/05/2009 20:34

I have this book of his:
www.amazon.co.uk/Teach-Story-Writing-Writers-Workshop/dp/1853469165/ref=sr_1_4?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1 242588729&sr=8-4

which is for key stage 1 and is fab..well worth it if you are going to teahc in KS1 LewisFan

popsycal · 17/05/2009 20:37

i can recommend the storymakers chest for ks2 by the wonderful pie

cazzybabs · 17/05/2009 20:44

ohh robinpuds ideas are fab...like the giant piece of paper...great for indpendent group work.

You could even introduce the topic by pulling out of a bag...a golden egg, a harp etc and get children to ask you (in character as Jack but don't tell them) where you got them from and what are you going to do with them etc.

I just keep coming back to this "use key features of narrative in their own writing." where I am guessing she wants you to write a tradtional story...but you could re-tell it from the point of the giant etc if you are feeling brave

Don't forget to share the lesson ojective and the marking criteria.

Do you have year 1? Am I right - mine will do anything for a puppet - ohh show X how to sit on the carpet and how to hold your pencil correctly.

popsycal · 17/05/2009 20:48

Lewisfan - there are sme great ideas here. Hope that you can find something that will work for you.

Dont forget the share LO and success criteeria and revisit at the end.

mrz · 17/05/2009 20:49

Worth looking at Alan Peat's resources too