Can anyone have a look at my first ever eBay listing and let me know what they think

[Virgil]

I want to have a blitz and list lots of things but I've not done this before.

[http://www.ebay.co.uk/itm/Bubblegummers-Girls-Light-Up-White-And-Pink-Trainer-Shoe-Leoni-Size-7-/140828415976?pt=UK_Clothing_GirlsShoes_GirlsShoes_GL&hash=item20ca0717e8#ht_718wt_108]

Hope that works!

Hmm don't think it did

www.ebay.co.uk/itm/Bubblegummers-Girls-Light-Up-White-And-Pink-Trainer-Shoe-Leoni-Size-7-/140828415976?pt=UK_Clothing_GirlsShoes_GirlsShoes_GL&hash=item20ca0717e8%23ht_718wt_108

Just noticed the typo "pet fee" which won't help

Are you sure it's your first ever listing?!!

Yes but it took me ages and I still ended up with typos. Does it look ok? Do I need bigger font? Is the description detailed enough?

It looks fine to me

Do you have 2 pairs of them?

Yes stupidly messed up my order in amazon (tried to order different sizes and failed!) and then just to add insult to injury I forgot to return them in time!!

Oh no! I thought maybe you had put 2 as in 2 shoes! It looks good, not at all like a first listing. Good luck

They are £30 on Amazon do you think £19.99 is too much?

All looks fine,I turns are really clear.

Can you tell me about the eBay for iPad app? Do you take the pictures on your iPad and add them to the listing?

I have loads to EBay but our camera is broken....

Yes pissydust, the app was actually pretty straight forward to use. You touch the box and then it takes you to your picture library.

Thanks Virgil, that's brilliant and I never knew I could use my iPad!

I think you should add pictures of the actual shoes you're selling - show them with the box, and show shots of the soles to prove they haven't been worn. Example here . Good to have a "proper" photo as your main one though, looks better in search results.

oops sorry, just seen your other photos! Ignore above.