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any one want a poem??

36 replies

almostanangel · 03/02/2006 12:37

ok house work done ....am in poetic mode want one ? what you want it for..huh huh?

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jco · 03/02/2006 23:41

i'd like a poem to make me feel better about my dumb ass ex please!!

almostanangel · 04/02/2006 07:34

jco.......without knowing your situation i will try,,

for jco

ex,,,

so it diddnt work
god knows i tried
but the fire in your eyes somehow just died
was it ever there?
was ot a lie?
mines been put out by the tears that ive cried

i gave you all i had to give
you never gave the same
did you leave me long before you left?
do you hear me call your name?

before with longing i cried for you
now i scream in pain
will i ever love ,,,ever feel that way again?
i hope my soul can be repaired
can leave that darkened room
can see the way you deadened every feeling i had can heal my deep felt wounds

so this is the final time you will see my
written word
no kisses at the bottom
no dreams of songs un heard
i leave this on your suitcase
youve left there inthe hall
i will change the number on my heart
so dont you try to call,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

i hope that you find happiness
and dont have to look behind
as you know i wont be
waiting here
thats it
its sealed
and signed

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beep · 04/02/2006 07:51

I'd like a poem for dd1 in hospital after a big operation on her legs. She is 11 1/2 thank you

almostanangel · 04/02/2006 08:12

beep! no worries

Darling daughter

darling daughter
i have to tell you
the way i feel inside
when you were in a dream land
i had to wait outside

they took you away from me
as you fell into your dreams
i had to stand back and see you go
im sorry....... but i cried

i know i should me stong for you
but alone i felt so weak
someone said are you ok?
but i just smiled....... couldnt speak
my heart was in my hand you see
i held it oh so tight
like the way you held my hand my baby
when your eyes first saw daylight
i wish i could change places and have the pain youve had.id do it in an instant and wouldnt once look back

i waited and i waited till they brought you out again
you opened your eyes for a second .smiled and closed them tight again

i sat here by your bedside
and watched you dream your dreams
till you woke and asked me for a drink
and beamed your smile at me

so darling you are back and with me
and i know your in some pain
but read this when your older
and know i felt the same

im so proud of you my darling
so if sometimes i shout or yell
please know your mummy loves you
for you my soul id sell

....

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beep · 04/02/2006 08:20

thank you almostanangel that is so lovely (she says wiping away the tears) I will show it to her.

almostanangel · 04/02/2006 08:22

sniff ,,,did you want something more funny ? if so give me more details hun

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beep · 04/02/2006 08:32

no thats lovely thank you maybe another time I will have to think of some funny things. I've got to go now and have a bath and get ready to go back to Oxford and see how she is getting on.

almostanangel · 04/02/2006 08:40

ok good luck hope shes 100% better as soon as posible xx

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almostanangel · 04/02/2006 08:40

ok good luck hope shes 100% better as soon as posible xx

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almostanangel · 04/02/2006 08:46

ok poetry shop closed for the day off to clean me mums kitchen u,bend!! yayyyyyyy

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jco · 04/02/2006 12:17

almost an angel, thats beautiful and sad, made me cry!!!! xxx

almostanangel · 04/02/2006 15:17

thanks hun x

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faeriemum · 05/02/2006 20:00

almostanangel, you have a beautiful heart
when your feeling poetic again, if you could create a little something about me and ds....we're all eachother has and all eachother needs...he saved me from ending my life before his birth, and then nearly died when his was begining...he's my special little boy.

almostanangel · 05/02/2006 20:15

yes will do it tomorrow if thats ok as a thank you ,

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faeriemum · 05/02/2006 20:20

thankyou your a sweetheart.
if u need more to go on i'll happily spill.

almostanangel · 06/02/2006 06:57

hun can you email me with the correct spelling on ds i forgot to write it down! lol

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carla · 06/02/2006 07:00

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almostanangel · 06/02/2006 07:01

lol
so did you find a roamn one?

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almostanangel · 06/02/2006 07:01

roman even

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carla · 06/02/2006 07:01

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almostanangel · 06/02/2006 07:02

i was 14/15 then!!

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carla · 06/02/2006 07:02

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carla · 06/02/2006 07:02

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almostanangel · 06/02/2006 07:03

nah but if you have today can get one done by toight

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faeriemum · 06/02/2006 09:26

Korben i have to be different with this naming business....runs in the family...full of weirduns'.