I've written an adventure story set in New Zealand about a boy labelled a "dummy" who stumbles into a magical world with his brother and sister. It's unpublished, and before going further I'd love honest feedback from parents (and their children, if they'd like to read it together) on whether it grabs young readers and which age group it suits best. It's the first two chapters, read online through a private e-reader, with a few short feedback questions. It's completely free, and I'd only ask for the child's age in the feedback, nothing else. If you'd be interested, please send me a message. Thank you!