Anyone fancy critiquing a play-script?

[JohnFarleysRuskin]

Hello,
I have written a play - about three ordinary women who tried to do something extraordinary - and would love some feedback.
I'm very happy to do swaps...
Please let me know if you'd be interested.
Many thanks

It sounds great, JFR, and I'd love to read it, but I've not read many scripts so I don't know how useful I could be. Are you going to send it to the BBC Writing Room?

Ah thanks for your reply, Imperial. You very kindly read a TV script for me (and gave me some helpful feedback) about 18 months ago - name changed!

The Writers Room have now got submission windows for different genres, I think the next one I can go for is in Autumn. The one I sent before - that you helped with - got selected to the last 20% but alas not the last 5%. I'm still pushing it out there, a bit.

If you still would like to read this new piece, that would be great, but I can appreciate its tres dull reading the same author/same style(?) again. Either way, if you've got anything you need critiquing do let me know.

Hi JFR, I'd be happy to read it. I used to teach an undergraduate playwriting course and miss reading new plays!

Ah thank you Greedy, I'll PM you.

If you're still looking I'd be happy to do a play swap?

Hi Tilda, I'll PM you.