Is anybody interested in swapping novel chapters so that we can do line-by-line critiques of the other person's work? I'm finding it difficult to find a friend who is honest enough to do this (I know I have pacing issues, so I just don't believe the friends who say, "I loved it! Don't change anything!"). I'm looking someone who can be very honest, even to the point of identifying the place where they "lost interest" in a chapter.
Also, I'm an English teacher, so I actually love grammar nitpicking, if this would help anyone.