Who am I?

[RegrettablyYours]

I would really value some feedback on a book that I am writing. So far I have uploaded the first 2 chapters. Please read it here: www.wattpad.com/mystories

And thank you in advance!

Your link doesn't work. For me, it goes to my own wattpad account to the 'new story' page.

Oh thanks! I hope this one works:
www.wattpad.com/story/19637747-headlong-to-mayhem