Thoughts of "The Chalet School and Robin":
Joey is really forefront, and interfering at the beginning, probably even more stretched than EBD. I felt was almost to characterture of EBD's Joey.
The staff meeting she seems to be there to query each new idea so Miss A/Madge has to explain their reasoning. But if she didn't know such important things, then surely she wouldn't have been at the meeting.
Again, why does Corney (not her father) write to Jo to say they'll leaving. No way would the school not have received a formal letter. She says a letter for Madge was enclosed with it, but that's totally the wrong way round
The bit about the trunk, other than it really wasn't that funny, why does Jo rub in to Daisy that it was her mother's trunk, leaving her in tears. "I think mummy bought it when you left Austria" would be fine, without adding "there's another in the attic with mummy's stuff"-and surely if there was, then it would be with Madge not Joey anyway.
I also dislike the way they decide "oh Robin can stop her work for a year to be head girl". Surely the way it would have gone was them deciding they would open a special sixth and Robin asking to do that. The way it's put is very much opening a new 6th form so Robin can be head girl first. Maybe quite EBD but one I found irritating.
I liked Miss Slaters struggles, but I don't find her character links up well with later books.
I felt Jocelyn's issues with wanting to be games captain, were overplayed, would a 17/18yo really say in front of a teacher "I don't care who's in the team"? -and she was also "one of last term's new girls" so I wouldn't have thought she would have expected it. She behaves more like a 12yo in a sulk. Cold and indifferent, fine, but not stropping in front of teachers.
Also telling her she'll probably get a chance next year seems a little presumtious of the prefects who have no choice in the matter. Wouldn't have thought an intelligent girl would find that much of a comfort, having expected to be once, pinning her hope on that seems wrong. I think it would have been better if they'd bought Grizel in to talk to her parents or something.
There's a lot of EBDs that I find irritating when she does them-like taking ill Joey's children "because she can't possibly look after them by herself" (and a few staff and probably could pay for a full time nurse if necessary) into school to look after them. Really? But I find it harder when it's someone else writing them, probably unfairly.
DD2 enjoyed it (except when she got told off for finishing it under the covers with a torch!) but it left me a little frustrated.