anything to add

[jillyj]

hi, i have been updating my website. is there anything else you think i need to add?
www.jillyjays.co.uk

Jilly, a very attractive website, clear and easy to navigate.

The last line of your childminder's poem is obscured by the trailing vine, so can't read it.

Apart from that - FAB

Wow, that is fantastic! I don't have a website but seeing how good yours looks makes me think maybe I should get on to it!

Apart from the poem comment that Boys made, there certainly isn't anything else I can think of. It really is great.

I would change your TITLE, currently it is:
Jillyjays - Home
That isn't very descriptive.

Search Engines love the TITLE tag. Put quite a bit in it. For example:
Jillyjays - Ofsted Registered Childminder in Croydon near Atwood Primary School, Sanderstead, CR2./title>

I would also suggest you modify the TITLE tag for other pages, so that they also contain a phrase visitors are likely to search on - such as "Ofsted Registered Childminder in Croydon", "Ofsted Registered Childminder in Sanderstead", "Ofsted Registered Childminder near Sanderstead Train Station"

I feel the HOME page needs to contain more information relating to where you are located, how to contact you, that kind of thing.

Hope that helps.

thanks. i have emailed comments so far to her. not really sure what nannynick means (bit thick re tech stuff) but i am sure it will be better.

could anyone bump me the list of places to advertise. have been looking but cant find it.x