**have set up a website can you tell me what you think**

[lottiesmummy]

\link{http://www.geocities.com/vernoncaroline/Childminder-watford.html\caroline's childminding site}

what do you think?

Was my 1st attempt, please be nice lol

Seems ok. Is it just the one page?

yea thats all they give you, but i thought "its a start" can't afford a proper one till im earning

It's fine. You can get domain names so cheap (where I get them it's £6.09 for 2 years) so might be worth investing in one that you can forward to your free webpage. At least if you have business cards/posters up etc. you can advertise your webpage as something more memorable iyswim :)

looks good - well done for getting online!
To be honest one page like that is really all you need for a small business - it's a kind of virtual business card rather than a huge online resource.

If I was getting nitpicky I'd capitalise the Is in the first sentence and phrase it as 'I have 14 years of experience as a nanny', but that's personal choice

Agree with getting a domain so you have a more memorable web address - you can also use it for email, so you could put [email protected] or something on your adverts if you wanted to keep your aol address for personal use.

yea true, im going round shops 2mrw putting postcard ads up so fingers X'd

the only thing i would change is you email address - i'm sorry but i'm not sure i would want me child looked after by chezbabe!

thats the email i uses for everything, signing on AOL etc, so need to use to really

thats the email i use for everything, signing on AOL etc, so need to use to really

thats the email i use for everything, signing on AOL etc, so need to use to really

you could just create a new email account

ok changed email to [email protected]

its the beggining of my postcode :)

better? lol

katzg - that's kind of what I meant but didn't want to be too harsh!

New email address def a good idea, even if you just set it up to forward to your other account. Personally I think it's a good thing to keep all professional and personal contact details strictly seperate - but it's obviously an bit different if you're working in your home as with childminding.

good address!

whoohoo got it right lol

thanks guys, just hope it helps ((hug)) to you all :)

what about putting things like non-smoker etc on there, also types of food

Well done you - I woudn't know where to begin!

Agree with Mrs Badger re slightly rewording the opening paragrah. I would also include all qualifications, NNEB, First-aid or whatever.

That is a brilliant email adress btw!

Good luck!

much better - didn't mean to sound horrible at all, the new one gives a much better impression

re-wording would help, eg I'm Caroline, a childminder with 14 years experience of nannying... etc. have to fly now but can help rewriting if you need it

\link{http://www.geocities.com/vernoncaroline/Childminder-watford.html\ carolines childminding site}

have updated it, kept loosing it earlier, has taken ages lol

Do you need a ? after email me. Didnt look quite right.

ok am all done now

\link{http://www.geocities.com/vernoncaroline/Childminder-watford.html\caroline's childminding site}

last time im changing it tonite, i now got a headache, :)

thanks for helping

Hi caroline, just been reading the posts, i created a web site on www.freewebs.com and created a website on there, it gives u loads of space to put hundreds of pages on. I then went onto www.dot.tk and changed to a domain name and my website is now www.kppoohbearchildcare.tk.

GOOD LUCK

thanks for that, :)