AIBU TO FEEL THIS WAY - HELP NEEDED!

[ThisWaryAzureNewt]

I wrote this poem to symbolise how I feel. AIBU to feel its horrible poem?

Oh, heart, and then it falls, and then I fall, and then I know, my heart, I never be, I never see, I never know

Ever see, ever be, ever know my heart
Ever see, ever be, ever know

Home and I know
Playing the deck above
It's always different
I'm the one in love
Home and I know
Playing the deck above
It's always different
I'm the one in love

It's not a horrible poem if it expresses exactly how you feel. Does it?

its soooo bad

You didnt write that! Those lyrics are from the song Genesis

what the f*ck!

I had to laugh at this 😄

Oops!🤣

Ha! That’s like that tv series Ann Droid. Sues son used her robot to write a song. 🎶

Benefit of the doubt op. Did you maybe not realise the words in your head came from a song

Well spotted https://genius.com/Grimes-genesis-lyrics

Hi, Grimes!

"Genesis" lyrics
Grimes Lyrics
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"Genesis"

My heart will never feel (be)
Will never see
Will never know
Oh, heart
And then it falls
And then I fall
And then I know [x4]

My, My, My
Ever see, ever be, ever know
My heart
Ever see, ever be, ever know
My heart

Home and I know
Playing the deck above
It's always different
I'm the one in love [x4]

My heart will never feel (be)
Will never see
Will never know
Oh, heart
And then it falls
And then I fall
And then I know [x2]

Ever see, ever be, ever know
My heart
Ever see, ever be, ever know

Home and I know
Playing the deck above
It's always different
I'm the one in love [x2]

Home and I know
Playing the deck above
It's always different (now)
I'm the one in love [x2]

Oh come on!

Trying to the op an out.

😂

Is this like that storyline in neighbours where the guy had flu and accidentally wrote and published a book that already existed?

But seriously op. If you are feeling bad it’s ok it song lyrics/ poems help you vocalise how you are feeling. Maybe don’t pass them off as your own

You’ve just watched Ann Droid.

It works better as a song than a poem.
Anyone know what 'playing the deck above' means?