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Creepy Forest/Dog running off/Scary tale?

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TakeMeToKernow · 03/06/2021 19:45

AIBU to ask someone to please direct me to the CREEPIEST story I’ve ever heard on MN, about someone who was house sitting in a forest and then a dog got out... if you’ve read the story, you’ll know it. Much to my OH’s annoyance I was up till about 1am trawling the woo threads in Classics but couldn’t find it 😫

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JesusInTheCabbageVan · 03/06/2021 19:49

Here you go!

"Warning: it's very long (sorry) and very freaky, and if anyone can come up with a rational explanation I'd be extremely grateful because I'm generally a pretty rational non-woo where's-the-evidence person, but I've never been able to explain this and it still makes my heart beat faster and the hair stand up on my arms when I think about it, years later.

I was pet sitting for my friend several years ago. She had moved into a sort of small holding right on the edge of a village in the SW, with a huge garden that backed onto trees. At the time she had a right menagerie - chickens, ducks, a couple of Shetlands, cats and four black retrievers, three fully grown and one a half grown puppy. Originally DH had been going to come with me as a little holiday but the dates she ended up having to go away for work clashed with a couple of his medical appointments so he stayed at home with our dog and I went to petsit alone.

It was about halfway through my stay, a couple of nights to go. Late evening, already dark when I heard a massive commotion from the chicken shed, banging and thumping. I assumed a fox or something had got in so went out to check. As I was halfway across the garden the noise stopped instantly as if it had been shut off; by the time I got to the shed all was calm and the chickens were all settled, mostly asleep. No sign of any intruder or disturbance at all, nothing to explain the noise or any indication that the chickens had made a noise. Bit freaky but I didn't (and still don't) know much about The Way of Chicken so I locked up again and left them to it.

As I went back in the house a small black shape ran past me out of the back door and I realised the puppy must have got out. It streaked across the garden and off towards the woods. Cue much cursing, then calling her name in vain. More cursing when she didn't come back. I grabbed a torch and put one of the other dogs on the lead, partly for protection, partly because I thought the pup was more likely to come back if I had one of her canine companions with me and partly because I didn't fancy my chances of finding my way back to the house on my own even though there were a couple of vague paths that I'd followed when walking the dogs throughout the week.

Off we trudged into the wood along one of these paths, me calling pup's name at intervals and trying not to imagine murderers and rapists behind every tree trunk. We got to a point where it felt like the trees were starting to thin out and I remember thinking that I didn't remember a clearing on this path and we must have gone wrong somewhere when the dog with me slowed right down and started to resist going forward. I tried to jolly her along - while my stomach suddenly dropped like a stone - and she started growling, a really low serious rumbling growl. By this time I was practically shitting myself. I tried shining the torch ahead but the beam just sort of bounced back off the darkness if that makes sense? I got the sense of something - or somethings - moving but just sinuous deeper black shapes against the blackness and always on the periphery of vision. (The hairs on my arms are standing up again just remembering how completely and utterly terrified I was. I have honestly never known a feeling like it.)

At this point the dog sank right down, still growling, hackles up and refused to budge. I muttered something like "Jesus, you have got to be kidding me" and this ugly gurgling inhuman sort of voice hissed, right up close as if someone was right next to me "don't say that name". At the same time there was a horrible snickering sort of laugh. I cant express how utterly petrified I was. I can't remember having any coherent thoughts apart from the word "evil". That's the only clear thing I can remember. Me and the dog were frozen to the spot with pure fear. Then a different voice, really commanding, said "GO. BACK." That sounded more in my head but echoey, where the others had sounded out in the air IYSWIM?

Wherever it came from it did the trick. Me & the dog turned and belted back through the woods. She basically towed me, I just clung onto her lead stumbling to keep up and sobbing with fear. I lost the torch somewhere on that wild run but there was no way I was stopping to find it. How I didn't run blindly into a tree I'll never know, she guided me I guess. I can remember thinking desperately that I mustn't let go of her lead or "they" would get me.

When we got back to the garden she suddenly stopped - I did fall over her this time, onto my hands and knees - turned around and started snarling, proper teeth bared, rabid-looking snarls, back at the trees and the darkness. I thought I heard the snickering again but the blood was pounding in my ears so hard I can't be sure. I scrambled up and ran to the back door and she followed me but backing and snarling all the way as if holding something at bay. Oh, and the chicken shed was banging and thumping again. I got the back door open, me and her belted in, I slammed home every bolt behind us. The other dogs left behind were staring at the door and growling too with their hackles up and when I saw all three of them, puppy included, acting like that I started to cry properly because I honestly thought I was trapped in some horror film nightmare and was going to die. I don't know - I still don't know - what the black shape was that ran past me out of the house and triggered all of this because the puppy was right there in the kitchen.

Anyway I made sure every door and window was locked and bolted, I turned on every light in the house, I wandered round mumbling all sorts of weird half-religious half-spiritual shit to ward off evil spirits. Gradually the dogs settled down and stopped growling, and eventually stopped glancing at the door. Funnily enough I didn't sleep for one second that night and I rang my DH and begged him to come over the last couple of days. I know I didn't dream it because I was covered in scratches from running through the woods and had grazed hands from where I fell over the dog in the garden.

Nothing like that has happened before or since and I hope it never, ever does. It was the single most horrible, terrifying experience of my entire life."

TakeMeToKernow · 03/06/2021 19:53

Jesus you beauty! Can’t believe someone nailed it so fast! Thank you v v much :) and now would i BU to read it to the 4 x 14yr old girls I’m camping with... 🤔

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growinggreyer · 03/06/2021 19:55

I was just thinking that someone should send that story to the Youtube channel Strange but True stories, I would love to hear Steve White reading it out. Is the Op of that thread still here to say yay or nay?

Evvyjb · 03/06/2021 19:56

Good old Savernake forest...

Gothichouse40 · 03/06/2021 19:56

No, I would not read that to 14 year olds, some teens are more sensitive than others.

Nutrigrainygoodness · 03/06/2021 19:57

I remember reading that and being terrified. Wasn't it a fake though?

JesusInTheCabbageVan · 03/06/2021 19:58

You're welcome! Definitely read it to the girls - bonus points if you take them out into a forest after dark before reading it Grin

HarrietSchulenberg · 03/06/2021 19:58

Only read it to your camping teens if none of you ever want to sleep in a tent again!

Faranth · 03/06/2021 19:58

Jesus. I'm completely non-woo, and I'm sat here with every hair on my head stood on end!

And I live in the rural SW....

TakeMeToKernow · 03/06/2021 20:02

I’ve re-read it (and forgot it had your namesake in it @JesusInTheCabbageVan!) and decided I might let the girls off tonight! I can’t un-read it though 🙈

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ToffeeNotCoffee · 03/06/2021 20:05

I thought this had been de-bunked as a work of fiction.

Librariesmakeshhhhappen · 03/06/2021 20:14

The voices actually talking were a step too far in that story. It's made up.

bumblenbean · 03/06/2021 20:17

I think the voices make it pretty questionable- and actually it would be almost scarier without them. Great story though Grin

3orangekissesfromkazan · 03/06/2021 20:26

Who was the original OP? Did they ever post again?

warmandtoasty2day · 03/06/2021 20:29

a nice little bed time story with a mug of cocoa zzzz

itsgettingwierd · 03/06/2021 20:48

Fiction or not that made my hairs stand in end as it did the first time I read it!

forinborin · 03/06/2021 20:53

@Librariesmakeshhhhappen

The voices actually talking were a step too far in that story. It's made up.
Yes, I also thought exactly that. A great story overall, but the satanic voices immediately cheapen it.
Serin · 03/06/2021 23:16

Mine is no where as dramatic but we had an experience on a dark winters night when DH was away. It wasn't late and we were all huddled around the fire with me reading a bed time story to the 3 DC (aged between 4 and 7).
Cat and dog snoozing. When suddenly cat slinks off the sofa and creeps down the room with her tail all bushed out and starts this low weird hissing and yowling, staring intently at something. Then our harp that is positioned in that corner of the room played 3 really loud and clear descending notes.
The dog went mental, snarling and snapping towards the harp and then all the DC started crying and saying "I don't like this". I didn't like it either but I convinced them that everything was fine and harps often make noises by themselves.Hmm
Funnily enough we live in dense woodland that reaches right up to our patio. Nothing untoward has happened in the 18 years since then, but I often think that if I ended up living alone here, I would move!!

PigGondola · 03/06/2021 23:28

@Librariesmakeshhhhappen

The voices actually talking were a step too far in that story. It's made up.
Well, of course it’s made up. But I agree with others that as a piece of creative writing it would be better without the two voices. (And without The Way of Chicken...) Grin
ToffeeNotCoffee · 04/06/2021 16:53

It reads too smoothly and with plenty of supporting detail to keep the readers' attention.

Also, I agree the Satanic voices were a step too far.

indecisivewoman81 · 04/06/2021 18:08

No I love the idea of the voice, for me it tunes it into something much more demonic the. Simply a scary woods

LaBellina · 04/06/2021 18:12

If this is fake then I hope the person who wrote it will start publishing horror stories.
I’d immediately buy their book.

MilesOfSand · 04/06/2021 20:22

I don’t know, I think the voices are working as it’s been so well remembered here!

PigGondola · 04/06/2021 21:32

@MilesOfSand

I don’t know, I think the voices are working as it’s been so well remembered here!
I’m always baffled at how often it’s referenced on here, and think it’s largely contextual— it’s been shared so many times on Mn, people appear to think that gives it more of an appearance of truthfulness, when it was just a more articulate than average contribution to an old ‘woo’ thread that ticks off all the usual tropes — isolated house, woman alone, mysterious noises, dark woods, dark shapes, sinister voices, frightened animals, invocation of Jesus, chase.
MilesOfSand · 04/06/2021 21:35

@PigGondola it’s interesting isn’t it? I think humans are wired to love a good story and this one has the structure that we innately look for along with the (very faint!) promise of it being true. I think on the context thing maybe the forest it’s supposed to be in adds a bit of interest too which helps people to remember it.

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