to need MN jury to decide if DH or are right wrt the 'Gimme 5' rhyme

[Ilythia]

So, mine goes
Up above,
down below,
In the middle,
you're too slow.

DH's goes
Up above,
at the side,
down below,
You're too slow.

Clearly mine rhymes and scans and his doesn't.
DH is of the deluded firm belief that mine doesn't rhyme and his is the right version.

So who is right, MrIlythia or me?

you are, silly MrIlythia

The version I know goes

Gimme 5
On the side
Up above
Down below
You're too slow

So neither of you, sorry

Mine goes
Up above,
Down below
At the side,
You're too slow

Just to be difficult.

Dancing, that doesnt rhyme properly

MrsDW, yours is fine, as every other line rhymes.

bbls, he is, isn't he, bless him.

I'm with DancingThroughLife that is the version I have always known

You are not helping

dancing through lifes one is correct.

-gavel -

Sorry, but yet another version here:

High five
To the side
Down low
Too slow!

Dancing through life is right IMO!

So I should have said it's closer to your DH's so I'm afraid I'll have to take his side.

I'm with Dancingthroughlife, I'm afraid! :)

Agree with DancingThroughLife too.

Gimme five
On the side
Way up high
Down below
Sorry, you're too slow

Gimme five
To the side
Up above
Down below - too slow!

up above
down below
on the side
you're too slow!

Ilythia, how about if it was written

Gimme 5
On the side
Up above, down below
You're too slow

The rhyme would look better, but in a 5 line rhyme, there can't be rhyming couplets.

I can't believe how many versions of this are out there!

No, it's

Gimme 5
To the side
Up above
You're in love
Down below
You're too slow

I only namechanged to this a few days ago and couldn't believe it wasn't already taken!

I actually don't usually use this name, had thought about it though. You can keep the name.. but Dean's mine

No no no, he is MINE. I loooove him.

I haven't had a crush like this in YEARS.

I know, he is lovely. Seeing as we seem to have killed the thread anyway , who are you usually?

Oops.
I'm usually SacharissaCripslock. Who? I hear you cry!
Who are you? Clearly a woman of great taste, whoever you are.

Who is Dean Winchester?!?