Write in full sentences "I am a reliable university student..." "I have expierence working in two solicitors firms..." "I enjoy working as part of a team and communicating with the public"
Your university isn't in there. I would included that too.
It's a little bit soulless (although most cvs are tbh) but you could inject a bit more personality, warm it up a bit. Rather than 'enjoy working as a team' you could say 'I like to bring a friendly, approachable style to my work and thrive in people-focused environments.'
You've left an em dash in the final sentence, is that an Ai giveaway?
For part-time student work make it really clear when you're available e.g. I'm available evenings, weekends and Wednesday mornings, and looking to work 16-21 hours each week.