The writing looks fine to me.
I was reading the content and it looks like someone educated to a high degree.
I guess it's easy to sit and laugh at someone else.
My handwriting isn't good. But there's nothing I can do about it. Obviously these days it doesn't matter because nearly all of my written content is done via computers.
In the end these days it's the content that's important not the handwriting.
It's more important that you can express yourself clearly with good grammar and punctuation.