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Please help with wording for this invitation

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WoolyBoots · 02/01/2015 23:26

It's for a meal to celebrate a marriage that has already taken place.
We would love you to join us for a meal to celebrate our marriage
Or
We would love your company for the evening to celebrate our marriage (but this sounds like a party and it's just a small meal!)
Which would read/sound better do you think?

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ElviraCondomine · 03/01/2015 21:46

I like the first. It's clear and simple, and heartfelt. I think that's more important than some formal wording.

HyperThread · 03/01/2015 21:47

Love for you?

WoolyBoots · 03/01/2015 21:50

Thanks for the advice, I'll stick with the first then as I would rather it sound heartfelt and simple. Will change it to love for you.... Thanks very much.

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