fake chapter one continues....
(As he finished speaking, Snape looked to Draco and saw him visibly flinch.) Voldemort turned towards the wraith like figure cowering near the only exit. he regarded him imperiously.
'Such a pity Draco proved so ineffectual last time,'
'my lord...,' interrupted Draco, hesitatingly, 'Snape didn't give me...
'Silence!' Snape bridled, 'Do not interrupt the dark Lord! It is still professor Snape to you, as i fear you still have a great deal to learn,' Snape turned towards Voldemort, 'If it is the dark lords wish that you continue your miserable existence'
Voldemort turned away, facing the fire,'He may still prove of some use Severus, tell me more about this little gathering. Will the mudblood be there?'
'The Mudblood Granger? my lord? I presume so, she is close to the weasley boy.
Voldemort turned back from the fire, the light forming an aura around his dark cloak. 'Good.'. He placed the very tips of his fingers together and suppressed a chuckle. 'I'm not concerned about Potter until I've had some fun with his little friends.'
Draco slipped un-noticed into the corner of the room, shadows hiding his face, thinking of happier times, clouding his thoughts from the two dark wizards in the centre of the room.
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i think we need a new thread for chapter one. we're interrupting the theorisizing etc...