Would you like to critique my outfit?

[MissisBee]

So, this is what I have planned for a wedding later this year. What do you think? Does it all come together ok, is there anything you would change or suggest? Please be honest!

I think you look lovely but prefer the nude shoes :)

This is the belt tied in a bow

This is it round the waist. I'm not sure if this works, but I actually have a pink sash/ belt from another dress which I could replace this with if you think the idea of it going round the waist works (if that makes any sense at all)

That looks great

Yes, the second one looks great.

Hi, I'm back again after having a wee think and play about with this.
1 - have found a way to tie belt round my waist which looks better.
2 - decided I would go with pink shoes or bag, not both. After trying a few combos, I took the ankle strap off the ivory shoes and now I like these best (also, they are the most comfy).
I haven't had a chance to look at alternative jackets or cardigans yet, so will stick with this one for now.

What do you think?

Looks fine

That looks lovely! Much prefer the ribbon like that.
PS you are so brave doing this, people are so honest!

Gorgeous - I liked the original pic but the latest version is definitely improved, the belt around the waist really works. I like the shrug personally.

Ribbon around the waist looks best.

Yes to the ribbon around the waist, and the nude shoes - your final version gets my vote. You look great!

Doh - not the nude shoes at all... the ivory without the ankle strap - sorry!

Thanks Jenda it's been really fun and informative

I liked your first version, but this one is even better - it's more elegant. You look great.

Lovely . Shoes and belt better than originals. Looks classier.

Don't like the shrug - find them really frumpy.. Could you maybe get a little jacket?

Personally I think the pink shoes work better - it's the style of them that's the problem - a little bit square. The nude shoes etc look bland and washed out.

I think the dress works well with the pink and green, but I'm sorry I really don't like the hat - it's a bit vintage TV series WI. And I'm not convinced by the cream cardi.

Nude shoes and ribbon around the waist. I am not a fan of hats or fascinators.

I actually hate all hats personally but, as they go, I think it looks OK with the dress.

I like the final version very much

Thanks everyone. I really appreciate all the feedback. The hat is staying! provided it survives the plane journey. I do intend to have a look round at different jackets, there was one suggested further upthread that I like the look of. The shoes still seem to be splitting opinions. I might let comfort win over style on that one